Drabble.

Jun 12, 2008 17:04

            It was the little things that nagged at her, miniscule thorns that had managed to work themselves into her side and refused to be removed. The strangest thing was, these thorns were all things that were utterly stupid, like that she had borrowed Andromeda’s favorite quill and forgotten to return it.

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general, harry potter, andromeda tonks, narcissa malfoy

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queen_tuala June 13 2008, 20:22:37 UTC
Thanks for the feedback!

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farfallerossa June 13 2008, 18:50:06 UTC
With the exception of a few jarring words (which is understandable in a timed drabble) really nice insight into Narcissa! I like how the things that would have been cute in like, a happy fic (five year old Narcissa stealing birthday truffles) have become haunting.

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queen_tuala June 13 2008, 20:24:47 UTC
Oh yeah, I noticed that when I was just looking it over after I posted it here - I should have fixed them, I did have a little extra time...*shrugs* But yeah.

Now I kinda want to write that (Andromeda's birthday)

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