Lucius and Narcissa, an upscale ballroom, and a time full of troubles and a war looming on the horizon. It's been three years since the last book came out and this couple still has my heart.
Very enjoyable and well written, capturing so much sensuality and passion, there is depth and character nuance here and a blessed absence of the usual smut, which is well and fine, but seems to be all people want to write these days. Best of luck in your original fiction, you should fare quite well.
It's very beautiful. Because they are on the sideline of the main story, and because they are on the wrong side, we never think of the Malfoys as humans, but you succeed in making them live!
This is gorgeous. Your use of language is heady sensual, and their interaction is just so wonderfully real. I love that they are finding themselves with each other.
This is a glorious and haunting piece of work. I don't read a lot of HP fic, but your summary caught my eye :) Best of luck with your original fiction, if it's anything near the standard of this it will be amazing. :) HK
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