Essay=LATE

[quatrina]

しょうらい私はきょうさんぼうどうを始めようと考えています。　ぜんぜんお金がないから、　しほんしゅは私がきらいです。　ぼうどうのために、　のうみんやろうどうかいきゅうをあつめておきます。　まだプロパガンダを作いません、　でももうファジーぼうしをイーベーで買いました。ミシガンの友達はマオぼうしをゆうするから、　あの人はぼうどうを手伝うと言いました

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[deux]

"アメリカでだれもきょうさんが好きだのだ" -> 好き should be negative there I think? If I remember right, even though you're saying 'no one' you still have to make the thing the no one is referrring to negative also. But you might want to check :D;

Also I'm pretty sure I'm proud to be a part of your Communist revolution XD

[quatrina]

...Why must everything look like it should be a double negative? T_T

[deux]

I hate that about Japanese :D It ends my translation up with sentences like "The gentlemen didn't think it wouldn't be noticed." WTF NO.

[absentaserpis]

Yanno English is the weird one for not accepting the double negative.

[seraphjewel]

Because I never have any money, capitalism hates me

Me too, me too x___x;