[Fic] - Life in the Hollow Bastion Restoration Committee (Chapter 4)

[quakewithfear]

A face full of fairy wasn’t exactly what Leon was expecting to wake up to, that’s for sure.  Well, it would have been perfectly acceptable if the fairy in question had been Cloud…

No!  Wrong kind of fairy!  Bad thoughts!  Bad thoughts!  Leon smacked himself in the head with a pillow, much to the bewildered amusement of

Comments

[elkica]

Well I'm not good at constructive criticism, but I also don't want to be the one to say, I love it. Even though I did. I love it, because of Leon's insecurity around Cloud, because of Cloud teasing, because of Aerith writing the porn and Youffie with her fight with small, round, blue piece of crockery with the reflexes and steely demeanor of a true warrior. LOL
Well...I guess I'm just an averge fangirl (trying to conceal that fact, though, so don't tell anybody), who likes the way you write.

[tipsybluetips]

I've just read the whole thing on FF.net, but then I decided to comment here because FF.net dislikes me a lot.
So. Can I say, Leon's Slips = WIN? Because that's surely what it feels like! It's just too fricking amusing when he inserts his foot on his mouth. I mean, see Leon being cute. It's tooo goooooood.
And I love Cloud seriously, even though I can't tell why he hasn't jumped Leon yet( Plot? Who needs that? ^^)
Aerith and Tifa being fangirls kill me muchly ded, and so does Merlin escaping from the bunch of weirdos clogging up his house.
What I really wanted to say and didn't quite manage is... this story rocks. YOU rock. It's funny, it's nice, and it's easy to read, and I'm really looking foward to the next parts (no pressure, though. \o/ I know sometimes writing can be hard for gazillion reasons)
Thanks so much for writing this story! ^^