[DARK MONTH] - SIX

[quakewithfear]

Title:  SIX
Author:  Xanthos Samurai
Fandom:  Kingdom Hearts II
Pairing/Characters:  ______/Namine
Rating:  R
Length:  2,505
Warnings:  Pedophilia, blood, implied violence, disturbing themes.
Disclaimer:  I do not own nor claim to own anything but the arrangement of the words on the page. 
Notes:  This took me WAY longer than I anticipated, but I got to

Comments

[syvia]

REVERSAL! Whoo-baby. :o

[quakewithfear]

*grin* Yep! Couldn't have it be too straightforward! Otherwise, where's the fun?

[kacfrog711]

OSHI--- Ha ha, didn't see that one coming

[quakewithfear]

YAY. I was really hoping that the twist at the end would indeed be a surprise - sometimes I can't tell if things are really as unexpected as I think they will.

>_< The only problem with dark month is the time constraints. I was really pressed for time for this one. I had a lot more ideas that I wanted to fit in and just didn't have time to do. ^^;; Same goes with really going back and editing. This is one of those stories that I may very well go back and completely rework at the end of the month.

*GRIN* I worked REALLY hard to make the man ambiguous, although I threw a few REALLY small hints in there. ^^;; They're probably not obvious to anyone but me. But I can tell you that it's definitely not Marluxia. Maybe when/if I rework this I'll actually say who it is. ^_^

I'm so glad you liked it!!

[oni_gil]

Whooo... >.> *shiver* Eek. I think I'm going to go curl up in a corner and die every time I see dear, sweet, innocent little Namine now... Yikes. T.T But a good, Octber-y sort of yikes. Just your specialty. <.

[quakewithfear]

*grin* Namine was ALWAYS scary. You've just gotta know how to look for it.

^_^ Glad you liked it!

[rah_bop]

WAUGH That came out of nowhere!! Nice twist! Totally caught me off-guard. At first I thought it had been someone else stabbing him. It didn't occur to me it would be Namine herself. Dude.

I think this story would be even better if it went even more slowly and had more of a sense of passing time, but I hesitate to say that because I know you spent a lot of time working on this and that it's only supposed to be a quick thing anyway. XD I think this story was awesome, but it also has a lot of potential as an outline for a longer fic. It was gud.

[quakewithfear]

^_^ Aww I'm glad you liked it!

I know there were some problems with the pacing, but as you said it's mostly due to the fact that I was really pressed for time. But I'm definitely planning to come back and revisit this once the month is over and make it into a longer, more cohesive fic. Thanks for all the great comments!

[pervertparadox]

Couldn't think of anything to say beyond 'fun times'...
Damn my obsessively watching the movie 'Hard Candy'

[quakewithfear]

*grin* Fun times INDEED.

Thanks for reading!