[DARK MONTH] - ONE

[quakewithfear]

Title:  ONE
Author:  Xanthos Samurai
Fandom:  Super Smash Bros. Brawl
Pairing/Characters:  Pit
Rating:  PG-13
Length:  174  Words
Warnings:  AU.
Disclaimer:  I do not own nor claim to own anything but the arrangement of the words on the page. 
Notes:  And it begins...

Prompt:  Sleepwalking - Pit - Super Smash Bros. Brawl - Suggested by karmacitadel .

Comments

[karmacitadel]

And with this, we literally fall into October.

GREAT lead-off with this, Xan. I was waiting anxiously, and you definitely didn't disappoint!

Me (and Mao and Almaz) give this a big (severed) thumbs-up. XD

[quakewithfear]

Heh! I didn't make the connection with "falling" into October until you said it.

I'm glad you like it! I don't have a lot of experience writing Pit and I had to give some serious consideration to the prompt to figure out exactly what I was going to do. I was a bit anxious over not utilizing the actual prompt as much as I'd have liked, but it was fun!

[ixaekt]

I love the descriptions of the slimy, opressive tunnels, though all I could think was the sexual metaphore that represents. XD;;;;;

OMG OCTOBER, YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY

[quakewithfear]

Ahahahahahahaha they WERE really sexual weren't they ahahahahahahahahaha.

*fail*

YAAAAAAY OCTOBER I'M SO EXCITED TO SEE WHAT YOU HAVE UP YOUR SLEEVE TOO! *keeping an eye on dA*

[oni_gil]

OCTOBEROCTOBEROCTOBERYAAAYFORTHEMOSTSTRESSFULBUTFUNMONTHOFTHEYEARYAAAY!

Heh. Heh heh. *purr*

[quakewithfear]

*grin* Well I'm glad you're excited!!

[oni_gil]

I am VERY excited! :D

[rah_bop]

I actually really like this one! I had a long conversation with a friend yesterday about sleep paralysis, so it's kind of weird to be reading this right afterward. Poor Pit! D: Sleep paralysis is so scary!

[quakewithfear]

^^;; I've never had sleep paralysis (that I've known of) but it seems to pop up in a lot of stuff I write, doesn't it? Funny how that works.

Glad you liked it!

[railenthe]

(Right, found your stuff browsing on a community earlier, decided to see where this whole thing started before going too far; so now that that's said, Ahoi.)

Oooh, nice~ You really got the suspense part of this down; I almost feel guilty for enjoying Pit's terror so much…almost.

[quakewithfear]

Ooh yay! Out of curiosity, which community? I'm always curious to know how people found me!

I really enjoy doing stuff with a lot of suspense, so hearing that I got the atmosphere down is really encouraging! Thank you for reading and commenting!