[Halloween Fics] - THREE

Oct 04, 2006 02:52



THREE

Leon still woke up in the dark sometimes.  It was always on cold nights, always on nights where the moonlight was hard like a blade and twice as sharp.  Suppressing a shudder, he got out of bed and reached for his jacket on the chair beside his bed.  His feet slid into his boots without even touching the floor and he was glad.  ( Read more... )

kingdom hearts, dark month, xigbar/leon, squall leonhart, three, xigbar

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aureawolf October 4 2006, 14:30:54 UTC
Yay for super creepy Braig!! Hehe, best part was definatley 'miss me miss me now ya gotta kiss me'. Well written, really interesting pairing. Rock on!

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quakewithfear October 4 2006, 15:48:12 UTC
^^:; It occured to me after I finished this that I'm possibly the only person to write this pairing ever. I wasn't sure whether to feel proud or just dorktastic. ^_^

Thanks for reading! The "Missed me missed me" line is one of my favorites too. Braig is so much fun to write.

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wickedorin October 4 2006, 15:17:49 UTC
...Excellent morning reading material. I'm actually happy to be awake. Lovely and vicious and wonderfully eerie... and quite hot. *cough*

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quakewithfear October 4 2006, 16:08:37 UTC
Hee hee. It was certainly fun to write, so I'm glad you enjoyed it. *grin*

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kacfrog711 October 4 2006, 16:52:30 UTC
.... dljkhdlkds I can't even critique this, I loved it so much. I loved the back-and-forth between past and present, I loved all the scenes of the past you showed, and all the actions you described. I loved the gunblade and the scar, and I loved the charactericterizations. Lovelovelovelovelove. <3<3 ( ... )

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quakewithfear October 4 2006, 17:11:25 UTC
XD;; Yeah, can you tell it was getting late and I was TIRED when I wrote the ending? Originally, I had planned to go back to the present, but I was falling asleep at the keyboard and said "ENOUGH" and posted it. ^^;;

You're very right about the ending... As tempted as I am to go back and fix it RIGHTNOW, I have to work on my drabble for today (and school XD;;) so it'll have to wait. However, I'll definitely fix it. This is my favorite of the three fics I've done so far by a long shot and has also been something I've been meaning to write for a while, so I'm very happy with it.

*squee* Your comments are the best kind of ego-boost.

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oblivilynn October 4 2006, 19:20:48 UTC
And this, my friend, is why I love Halloween so much. ♥ It gives us the perfect reason to write creepy-fucked-up-as-hell fanfics.

Not that we need a reason, of course. x3

Great job with this! :D Totally loved your characterizations, especially Braig. kacfrog711 already pointed out the ending thing, so there's not much else I can say, besides the fact that you're awesome. :D

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quakewithfear October 6 2006, 13:31:46 UTC
I have to admit that the only thing that's made me feel the Halloween "spirit" lately has been writing these pieces. And buying Halloween Oreos! *laugh*

For some reason, I find that writing "creepy-fucked-up-as-hell" fanfics is a lot more fun than writing just the normal kind. ^^;; Even when it's not "dark" month, I manage to put things like cannibalism and/or masochism or the like into my work. Of course, there's also the less fucked-up pieces and those are fun too. ^^;;

*laugh* Oh Braig. I was wondering if he'd be very different from Xigbar, but they ended up being fairly similar. He's a little more wise-cracky than Xigbar, but REALLY fun to write. Squall was also fun. I'll have to write more of that pairing. ^_^

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chocoemerald October 5 2006, 02:47:58 UTC
you're amazing!! the braig is soo creepy! *shudders*

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quakewithfear October 6 2006, 13:31:59 UTC
Thank you! ^_^

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