[KH2] - Bad Affection (Xigbar/Xaldin/Replica) (Chapter 7)

[quakewithfear]

            "Hey Roxas, wanna go hang out with me after you get out of school?"

"No.  What the hell are you stalking me for?  Go away."

“Awww c’mon… Don’t be like that!  We always have lots of fun together!”

Axel tossed uneasily in his sleep.  The night's exploits had placed him in a strange frame of mind

Comments

[marchwarden23]

*air punching glee*

I love your Braig so hard. This chapter just did me in with the sheer amount of awesome in it. And the fact that Riku is the clone of their bosses younger brother...so delightfully fucked up.

These updates make my day. =D

[quakewithfear]

Oh yes, things are fucked up... and only going to get MORE fucked up in the near future. ^^;; Hopefully it'll be a fun read!

^_^ Aww, thank you! That makes MY day!

[keyblade277]

You've probably gotten tired of hearing this, but I just love your writing style so much. It's very visceral; I can really feel everything that happens, to the point where I have to rub my neck after reading that first bit. ^^ You really are a talented writer.

Semi-knowledgeable praise aside: <3 <3 <3, new chapter, <3. I adore the messed-up father-son relationship between Braig and Repliku, and the fact that the real Riku was/is Xehanort's and Xemnas' younger brother. It'll definitely take a turn for the darker, but... I can't help but imagine Xemnas and Riku being total adorable dorks when they were younger! Xehanort would be the cool big brother, always going out with the ladies (even though Xemnas is the prettiest lady that he's got). So, um, yay, new chapter!

[quakewithfear]

Aw, all your compliments are making me blush! Thank you!

I really tried to show their relationship (in all its different forms) in this chapter, but especially the father/son dynamic they have going. I think it's the most interesting facet of their relationship, so it's the one I like writing best. Plus, it is INCREDIBLY profane. And I loves it. ^^;;

*laugh* I'm not sure what Riku's home life with his brothers was like, but I'm sure it was just a little different from what Riku's clone is experiencing now. I think the two older brothers will be making another appearance in the story soon, so we'll have to see how that goes...

Thank you for reading! You are awesome!

[sildil]

I adored this chapter! You manage to do gore, cannibalism, violence, sex, the whole bit and make it really very funny at the same time! LOVE it <3

[quakewithfear]

*beams* Thank you! I think that the humor offsets all the disturbing stuff nicely. Plus, it's good to throw in something light just so the whole thing isn't just DARK DARK DARK BLOOD BLOOD BLOOD EVIL EVIL EVIL. ^^;;

Thanks for reading!

[sildil]

And awesome twist btw xxx

[freed_wings]

Wow. What a great plot twist. I did sort of wonder which Riku was the original... and they all do have silver hair. But seriously, you rule. Srsly. And everything is cooler with vowls.