FF: This Is Not A Test

[quaggy_mire]

Title: This Is Not A Test
Rating: TEEN
Category: Post-Ep for Institutional Memory
Disclaimer: I do not own these characters or this show.
Archiving permission: Sure, just tell me first. 
AN: This isn't a J/D fic!!!  Ok... Yes, Josh and Donna are in it.  I am still a Keytus Kid, after all!  But it really is a CJ fic.  Actually, it's a CJ/Toby fic...

Comments

[quaggy_mire]

Thanks, dearest! I'm so glad you liked it! Especially since this is the first time I really wrote about Toby!

[christinekh]

So I came over here to give some much long overdue feddback (really, I suck at fb lately.) And you *know* it's the J/D stories I wanted to fb, and yet...

This is the one that keeps drawing me in. Making me think. Turning me into a puddle of mush. Absolutely lovely and perfect and so CJ. I love the bits that refer to how bad all of them are at this. At how bad CJ still thinks she is. At how she's trying to fix things. At her guilt. Wonderful.

(And all the J/D ones? I love them too. Heee!)

[quaggy_mire]

Wow! Thank you so much!

I'm extremely bad at feedback, too. So you may not realize how big a fan I am of your stuff. You make me feel a little like Charlie in "Proportional Response." I just came for the bike messenger job! :-)

[christinekh]

Your welcome! :)

And I'm happy to hear youlike my stuff -- though I admit I'm a hack. I just have the good tasate to be friends with good authors who inspire me to at least try. :)

[phla]

Quags, you mentioned this fic over at KK, and I came running, running, I tell you. This is so wonderful. "And you will always feel guilty that Danny is your Amy Gardner." A knife to the heart, is what that line was, because it totally rewrites the CJ arc for me. I had resigned myself to the 'Oh well, that's that' and this is where CJ ends up. With Danny.

And you killed it! Smashed to pieces! And I love it, in that I'm such a glutton for punishment way, because it puts a whole new section into my file of Things We Never Got To See. You really need to write more CJ/Toby, because you see, you are responsible for creating a void in the canon, so it is only logical that you be responsible for filling that void. Bwahaha, I am so evil.

[phla]

Heh, I was going to kick myself in the ass if I didn't comment on this, the first time around.

Phew, that was close.

Good job. Again. Almost a whole year later.

[quaggy_mire]

I never replied to your original comment!! Bad, bad Quaggy!!!

I'm really glad you liked it. It's amazing how an episode that was supposed to be all CJ/Danny was such a Toby/CJ think.

That widow scene. SIGH.

[imacartwright]

This is a wonderful story. I use my smiling Toby icon... cause, yeah. You really got to the heart of the CJ/Toby thing here.

Thanks for sharing. :)

[quaggy_mire]

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. What can I say? The episode was very inspiring!! :-)