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Great Plains High School AU: Chapter Three

Feb 11, 2013 23:19

Every time that Lynie tried to shift her mind and focus on her exercises, she caught herself thinking about Ryin King instead. Why did she care so much about his death? Despite having a few classes together, Lynie had never thought of Ryin as a friend. Yet his death still haunted her.

( You're still not doing it. )

ruby doesn't deserve a tag, character: fairon, character: gemma, character: jazz, character: maris, member: lilycobalt, character: lynie

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n3m3sis43 February 24 2013, 00:16:36 UTC

Sooooo, I finally read this. Better late than never? Ruby is a real dick, isn't she? Her tag amuses me. I'm glad you guys enjoyed the "no gingers" idea enough to use it.

I liked the way you described Lynie's time manipulation. I could really feel her disorientation.