SixIt's late when the cab pulls up outside his house. Despite not staying at the club, the movie hadn't been short and the glowing red numbers on his bedside clock blink 2:17 at him as he enters his bedroom in the dark
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The memory-heavy angry masturbation scene was appreciated (as well as the thoughts and realisations it encompassed). I knew that would happen. :D Also, Jensen's text. I loved that, especially "ergh. drunk.", that's just my kind of eloquence. Plus, smart conversation the next morning? Very nice. Actually, smart conversation is good at all times. Even more so when it is followed by serious conversation, as was the case.
Just reading along, love love love this story - thought I should point out a typo: "Quickly he sends of a text." Extraneous 'of' in there. Hate to be so abrupt, but I can't wait to get on to the next part.
Also, I don't know if you've tried to leave a comment on your own journal lately, but the 'leave a comment' area is reeeeally weird. Everything is dark grey on dark grey, you just have to click around to find the text fields, and the captcha box makes your answer invisible. 'Tis eerie.
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Bwhahaha! Indeed. I'm glad to see that Misha is starting to realize some things and figure them out. I am loving this story so much.
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“It’s already carved on my tombstone.”
“By yourself, no doubt.”
“Only way to know it’s done to my exacting standards.”
This sounds so real! I LOVE IT!
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Also, Jensen's text. I loved that, especially "ergh. drunk.", that's just my kind of eloquence.
Plus, smart conversation the next morning? Very nice. Actually, smart conversation is good at all times. Even more so when it is followed by serious conversation, as was the case.
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"Quickly he sends of a text."
Extraneous 'of' in there.
Hate to be so abrupt, but I can't wait to get on to the next part.
Also, I don't know if you've tried to leave a comment on your own journal lately, but the 'leave a comment' area is reeeeally weird. Everything is dark grey on dark grey, you just have to click around to find the text fields, and the captcha box makes your answer invisible. 'Tis eerie.
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That's strange.. when I leave a comment it's fine. I have light grey on dark grey and the text fields are all illuminated clearly!
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