Fic: Four Angels

Nov 25, 2011 11:46

Title: Four Angels
Pairing: mention of past Ohno/Sho
Rating: PG-13 I guess (I really don't know how to rate)
Disclaimer (?): i don't own Arashi, nor am I in any way related to then. This is all fiction.
A/N: OK, I've been writing this for a long while, and it was moving really slowly and I finally got bored sooo, yeah, abrupt ending!! Oh and one more ( Read more... )

p: yama pair, fic: arashi, arashi, c: ohno satoshi, c: matsumoto jun, fanfiction, c: ninomiya kazunari, c: aiba masaki, c: sakurai sho

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Comments 13

coolohoh November 25 2011, 13:39:51 UTC
its a nice and sweet story... and nope, i didnt stop any 'satochi's around, but maybe i'm just too engrossed with the story to notice :)

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qeedivertido November 25 2011, 13:46:50 UTC
i'm glad you liked it ^^
and i'm glad i didn't type Satochi's I honestly can't help it most of the time :P
thanks for reading and commenting!

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coolohoh November 25 2011, 14:18:33 UTC
dont worry... when i was trying to write my own fanfic (and its still unfinished), i made a lot of typos with their names too... like sakura instead of sakurai :S

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qeedivertido November 25 2011, 15:06:24 UTC
see? it's hard =P
the wierdest I've done yet is writing One instead of Ohno O.o
writing is hard...are you going to finish it or is it forgotten? ^^

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lakukuli November 26 2011, 01:04:41 UTC
A pesar de q él esperaba una final triste y solitario, me encanto q pudo ver a Sho otra vez, y q mejor q ser llevado por esos 4 bellos àngeles :)
Sabes q pensar q uno de ellos esté cerca de la muerte me asusta demasiado, como si se tratara de mi propia familia

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qeedivertido November 26 2011, 01:19:12 UTC
siii pobrecitos, no queiron que se mueran :(
y s{i, Satoshi pude ver a Sho una vez más <3 y conoció a los otros tres ángeles :P

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chibipinkpetals November 26 2011, 07:36:20 UTC
this story is bittersweet(?) is that the best way to describe it?...>.<
but nonetheless, i liked how you have Ohno being so tired and yet...T^T
How you have the rest of Arashi as Angels and Sho...<33
and Yama's love through it all T^T

thanks so much for sharing :D

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qeedivertido November 26 2011, 16:04:08 UTC
arashi angels is love <3 and Yama love is even better =D
I'm glad you liked my bittersweet story^^ thanks so much <3

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arashitv November 26 2011, 11:29:23 UTC
It's a beautiful and sad story.
I cry at the end T_T
I hope Ohno will become an angel and he can stay with Sho ^^
Thank you for sharing !

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qeedivertido November 26 2011, 16:07:07 UTC
nooo don't cry!! (though the fact that you cried with my story is a great compliment so also thank you a lot!!<3)
i was kind of thinking of Ohno becoming an angel too, i was going to write it but i thought the story ended well there and in the end i couldn't add it XD but in my mind the story continued a little bit XD
thanks for reading and comenting!!!

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