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THE WINDOW OF MY MIND

Apr 14, 2007 17:18

Title: The Window of My Mind
Written By: gaeln
Timeline: Post 513
Rating: R
What if: Justin was there
Warning: Justin as silent observer so, consequently, heavy on Justin’s inner thoughts and light on actual dialogue but it's fairly short and vaguely AU.
Author's Notes: Maybe this ‘what if’ has been done to death but I’ve only read one so…thanks once ( Read more... )

Comments 44

mickiebg April 15 2007, 08:36:10 UTC

Very nicely done-love this ending!

gaeln April 23 2007, 20:43:11 UTC

"love this ending!"
yeah me too, thanks so much for commenting.

testdog65 April 15 2007, 20:13:16 UTC

You have such beautiful imagery in this story - not just in the descriptions of what Justin sees around him, but also in the comparisons of those things to less tangible images.

I just loved how Brian turned away all the tricks, as if he could sense Justin’s presence and was waiting for him. Great ending! :D

~Ellen

gaeln April 23 2007, 20:46:25 UTC

Thank you for a lovely comment,I try and paint little painting without getting boring, that's how I see it in my head, show not tell so thanks for getting that. I also imagined Brian could feel Justin there and was just waiting for him.

randysgirl_645 April 15 2007, 20:18:27 UTC

I really liked justin's inner thoughts

gaeln April 23 2007, 20:47:29 UTC

thanks, glad you liked them and thanks for commenting.

lunachickk April 15 2007, 22:46:34 UTC

*happy sigh*

gaeln April 23 2007, 20:47:51 UTC

am glad

court1429 April 15 2007, 23:02:29 UTC

I would have loved to see this ending play out in canon. And the ending? Is exactly what I expect to have happened. :) Thanks!

gaeln April 23 2007, 20:48:56 UTC

Yay!!! I did good. Thank you for commenting