The Heartbreak

[pyrrhiccomedy]

Title: The Heartbreak
Author: wizzard890 and pyrrhiccomedy
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Russia, America.
Premise: The time comes to recognize the Soviet Union, and nothing is like it was.

Comments

[twistedsheets10]

...I'll be in my room, crying.

Dammit.

[pyrrhiccomedy]

I'm sorry. D= It's...it's what happens next...we couldn't help it. D=

[jinsai]

*whimpers*

It's all Stalin's fault America! Blame Stalin!!

>_> Oh, but this was a painful piece. Definitely hit right with the heartache. How much did the writing it kill you? ^^ God, but America needs a hug (Russia too, but damned if anyone's going to want to get close enough to give him one for a while at this point.)

[pyrrhiccomedy]

How much did the writing it kill you?

...*runs to her room crying, slams the door*

I'll be out in a minute. ;___;

[clover_magic]

I-I couldn't read it. D:

I-I tried, but every time I hit them beginning to interact and Russia being....Soviet Russia, I felt sick and had to stop. No!! >: Just...just...argh. Will maybe have a more complete comment if I can ever bring myself to read this without throwing up, because damn it you two's writing deserves it. I-I want to read, I do, b-but.....baaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwww D: *sobs* I don't want history right now!!

I'm sorry. ;A; I will try later. Oh god, I'll try.

Now I'm off toi work on that time machine again. It is ON, Stalin. SO on.

[pyrrhiccomedy]

*SOOTHE!*

Things...things will be okay...eventually... D=

BRB THERAPY

[rheoster]

This is so painful... I am skipping some paragraphs... I will come back to re-read this story after I have calmed down. This is how good your writing is, very few books move me like that ;_;

But damn... just... damn. I feel bad for America, but I am now wishing that Russia will NEVER revert back to sane!Russia. Because if Russia does come back to his senses one day... I don't even want to know how much this is going to hurt him. And America will have a hard time trusting him again. Heck, America is going to have a hard time trusting ANYBODY again. Or, America is NEVER going to trust anybody again. And now I don't even make sense anymore.

Excellent writing as always; the only things I can offer you are these broken pieces of my heart...

Re: BRB THERAPY

[pyrrhiccomedy]

I don't even want to know how much this is going to hurt him.

Oh, God, I think deep down it's eating away at him already.

I am so sorry for doing this to you guys. It's just...it's what happened next. D=

Re: BRB THERAPY

[rheoster]

You are apologizing for your wonderful writing? NEVER. As the other readers have said, we are sure that it was harder for you than us... And again, you did a magnificent job at provoking such emotions from the readers

Re: BRB THERAPY

[pyrrhiccomedy]

Last but not least, ROOSEVELT!!! And he called America "Alfred"?

Yeah, we figure, you know, humans would call the nations by their human names. With the exception of Stalin, who's sort of...incapable of appreciating Russia's humanity.

And FDR/America is a bromance.

[luxnigra]

I had difficulty to read this last chapter: Russia's words and behaviour are too cold, cruel, merciless. It was like a punch in the stomach. Is the first time since I started to read this story that I feel...I feel...destabilized. Too conflicting feelings: rage against Russia, sadness for America and, above all, compassion for a love crushed by fate and history.

[pyrrhiccomedy]

*Soothe*

I wish I could hand out cookies and warm milk at the end of this story. Just, "Thanks for reading. Here, this might help. I promise, this is the low point. Things can only get better. =/"