Party members should feel free to write up their own bios if they so desire. If you do write one, you can either email it to me or post it in a comment here, and I'll put it up under your name.
Additionally, if you deal a lot with a particular NPC, you can write a bio for them, too, if you want.
Also, does anyone know the spelling of Elspeth's last
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I just read through everything and so far so good. Just a few things I thought about. First of all, Lucan's name is spelt with a "c", not a "k" and his last name is Davanaugh if you want to add it. Second, I didn't notice anything in the description about Lucan's pact with Pyeter Krestov, how Pyeter is constantly tempting him to come to the dark side, and how Pyeter actually takes over temporarily at the end of the trap room in Moonbrook because Lucan sacrifices his own safety to help Elspeth in the traps. Also, if you want to add how much Lucan is a sexy beast, has a way with the ladies (might help when you explain the Vein Hideout part of him seducing Exiana to get info), and used his charm to get into the club with 5 different women and flashing some money.
Brendan
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