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[pyrimidine]

Y'all, why is this 10k? It should definitely not be 10k. The following is self-indulgent dribble, as per usual; cheesier than normal, but I had lots of fun writing it :D

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Written for this prompt, for this commercial:

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[laceymcbain]

This is wonderful! I love how patient and caring Eames is, and how screwed up Arthur is. This would be the plot for a delightful rom-com, you know?

Also, there were so many great lines I feel I should go back and quote them at you. About Yusuf being determined like people in a zombie survival movie. And the way they circle each other like an electron map. The Law & Order questions. Eames offering to make nature sounds for Arthur. *snort* Arthur saying his middle name is Elizabeth. Arthur not having a quilt. Scones as a pre-emptive apology. (See what I mean? So many small details that make for an entirely believable world.)

As Arthur would say: "Pyrimidine, I am impressed." ♥

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[pyrimidine]

Man, I can't even lie, I love rom-coms. A well done rom-com warms my soul for months! So this comment is making me kick my feet with glee. :DD Thanks so much for reading, and for the lovely comment! ♥

[mirareeves]

This is delightful! I love how easy they are with each other, but also how tentative it is, like they're still feeling each other out. It feels so real and and natural. And Eames. I love this Eames, so sweet and charming and nature noise making. Adorable.

[pyrimidine]

Eames will have you know that his repertoire of nature noises is pretty impressive, okay. He's almost perfected the 'tundra' catalogue :D

Thanks so much!!

[skyvehicle]

Wait. This is actually THE BEST fucking thing. I absolutely really love it, and want to give it another good read later on, but like, the NADS scooter. Being totally nonplussed about this ridiculous job. Yusuf being amazing. OMG POOR ARTHUR AND HIS CONCUSSION. I always love your writing and this is like... so detailed and wonderful and I just wanna hug it.

[pyrimidine]

lolol man this story is so self-indulgent in that I just wrote in everything that I found to be hilarious. CASE IN POINT: THE NADS SCOOTER. So I'm glad you found it to your liking :D Thanks so much!!

[silentsiren47]

This was awesome! I kind of want to live in this world. I like the dynamic between Arthur and Eames, and I love all the little details (like Cobb being really excited about statistics software). :)

[pyrimidine]

Yay, thanks!! Siiiigh, seriously, if only my next door neighbor were Arthur/Eames/someone who brings me warm scones. :D

[venilia]

*splutters* How is this so sweet? Can I be you when I grow up and write heartwarming fics like this?

[pyrimidine]

ahahahah thank you!! :D I'm glad there was a dash of heartwarming along with all the cheese, lol.