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Supernatural Fic - Send Lazarus to My Father's House

Nov 21, 2008 01:55

Wheee, dark!fic time! I love you, hell mythology. Even when everything else about the mytharc is bleh, I still love you. So! Er, this is not appropriate for...anybody. It's basically just Dean-whumping of the most sadistic and gory kind I've written to date. That's hell for ya, though. Oh god, I really shouldn't write things about hell when I've ( Read more... )

dean winchester is a douche, fluttery wings and horny things, ohgodohgodmybrain, fanfiction, oh fine castiel can have his own tag, shit's sad yo, entrails and other gooey bits, that show with the brothers and the car

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Re: ohhhhhhh pyrebi November 21 2008, 15:28:24 UTC

Erg. Damn me with praise why don't ya. -feels guilty to that to Dean-

But thank you so much for liking it enough to comment!

emeraldus November 21 2008, 08:05:51 UTC

VERY GOOD. And it ties in quite nicely to the first episode of the season.

pyrebi November 21 2008, 15:29:53 UTC

Thank you!

(I have issues with the thought that apparently Dean's been really fucked up inside for months now and we're only now seeing that. Repression and alcohol, I say.)

emeraldus November 21 2008, 17:34:47 UTC

I figure Dean is all fingers in the ears la la la can't hear you repression, all this has been shoved into a box somewhere in his head and there's so much of it that it's been leaking out the last few months. Having Alastair pop to say HOWDY has gotta be some kinda catalyst.

specialagentldy November 21 2008, 09:09:37 UTC

Oh, ow. :-(

pyrebi November 21 2008, 15:30:33 UTC

-offers bandaid?-

unreckless November 21 2008, 12:56:56 UTC

Oh.

Oh.

Okay, you totally. Um. Okay. Win.

I adore your hell. I told you this a few days ago, it's even more true now. And the mentions of John! And John only lasting a few years. And... just, yeah. I want all hellfic to read like this, too.

Oh, darling, he says, smooth and sweet like he's picking someone up in a bar. Oh, sweetheart [...]

This. This is why Dean would be one of the most horrific demons, because he's Dean. *shivers*

Because when he fucks her, trying so hard to be gentle, it's all he can do not to crush the bones in those thin white fingers between his teeth. Angel, huh? He wants to hear her squeal.I have a teensy problem with that and I'm not sure why. I love the language of it, but... I don't know. That's why the sex was so slow and careful, of course. It totally makes sense. Horrible, gorgeous sense. But it still catches at me when I read it ( ... )

unreckless November 21 2008, 14:51:12 UTC

Oh, and Joo wants Chipotle at noon.

pyrebi November 21 2008, 15:23:09 UTC

Om nom nom!

Er, Chipotle. Not Joo.

Time to take a showwwer!

pyrebi November 21 2008, 15:11:08 UTC

Two kinds of demons: the brutal ones and the slick ones. ...'Course, the slick ones are brutal, too--they just have brains and charisma, which makes them all the more dangerous.

-shrugs- Yeah, I dunno about the Anna scene. I really didn't like it on the show (oh, at all), so I guess I wanted to rectify that situation. What exactly about it bugs? I might be able to clean it up.

What? I don't know what you're talking about. I went to bed at 10:05. Somebody must've hacked my journal and posted random bits of violence.

New tags are love. I need to go back and retroactively tag some entries. (Like, oh...tria prima, I think.)

Have I mentioned lately how very much I adore you? No? Let me reiterate: I adore you. <3

unplugged32 November 21 2008, 13:47:24 UTC

Wow, horrible and gorgeous and heartbreaking and just..wow...

pyrebi November 21 2008, 15:32:19 UTC

Well, thank you! "Horrible" is what I was going for, so the others are like icing on my rather sadistic slice of cake. ;D