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Clinical -- Auron/Lulu

Jun 12, 2009 05:35

Title: Clinical
Game: FFX
Setting: Macalania Forest
Theme + Number: Dirty Hands (62)
Pairing: Auron/Lulu
Rating: R
Word Count: 100
Summary: Her hands are never dirty.

( Author feeling urge to revisit this community and finish what I started )

Comments 4

i_am_a_rose_4 June 12 2009, 18:45:35 UTC

Whoa.

This is all kinds of AWESOME. And that last line - just wow.

Really nicely done, for something so short - excellent.

intradependency June 13 2009, 02:02:32 UTC

I don't know if it's pyreflies that filled her palm, but when she licks her fingers clean, I feel dirty.

Are those your pyreflies filling my palm, Auron, or are you just happy to see me?

Best sexual allusion ever. :D

auronlu June 13 2009, 07:53:58 UTC

Heh.

Lulu has so many cheesy lines almost that bad in the game. I just make her R instead of PG-13. :D

cutie_aoide June 14 2009, 23:11:56 UTC

LOL That ending was awesome. I loved it because it came out of nowhere for me. Best suprise ever! <3 And I'm so glad you're still writing too. That was another good surprise for me. :)