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Fic: Tale as Old as Time Part 3/3 [Yo-ka x MiA, This Part PG-13, Overall Fic NC-17]

Jul 01, 2016 17:29

Title: Tale as Old as Time, 3/3
Chapter: 3 of 3, Part 1 is here and Part 2 is here
Author: Boots
Rating: THIS CHAPTER: PG-13. FIC AS A WHOLE: NC-17
Genre: Romance, smut, semi-fairy tale AU
Warnings: : FOR THIS CHAPTER: None. FIC AS A WHOLE: Male/male sex, attemped rape (non-explicit)
Pairing: Yo-ka (DIAURA) x MiA (Mejibray)
Disclaimer: Mejibray ( Read more... )

yo-ka x mia, donotrepost

Comments 5

hamhamheaven July 2 2016, 14:33:34 UTC

Looks like my comment from last night didn't post. Rude! So I'll post it again and try to remember everything I was fangirling about. The surveillance cameras instead of the magic mirror is a great, if totally creepy, twist, because it's something I can totally imagine happening in an ultra-militaristic society.

I see what you meant about one of your characters suffering a lot of abuse. Poor Kouki is going to need some love and attention after getting beat up like that.

It's really fitting that Yo-ka's final act as dictator was ensuring his own freedom to marry MiA. After giving everyone else in the country their liberties back, he deserves to take that piece of happiness for himself as well. Great job overall!

puss_nd_boots July 6 2016, 16:43:29 UTC

Kouki definitely is going to need something nice to happen to him after this. Just about every appearance of his in this fic, he's being imprisoned, beat up, or both. (Well, at least he didn't get thrown in an insane asylum like his counterpart in the original film ( ... )

leifang666 July 2 2016, 16:47:00 UTC

I love, love, love this! I remember seeing the photo that inspired this on my facebook page and that made me happy. :) Now this fic has made me love it more. You know a story is good when you finish it and just can't get the story out of your mind.

puss_nd_boots July 6 2016, 16:50:23 UTC

I am so glad that the fic made such an impression on you! The picture was most definitely inspirational. All I had to do was see Dictator!Yo-ka and Princess!MiA and the whole thing started sprouting. (I'm hoping for more magazines to do imaginative photoshoots like that in the future, since it's to my advantage!)

leifang666 July 6 2016, 18:06:20 UTC

I love it when a photo shoot really gets your mind racing. :) That being said, this year I'm trying to finish things I've started and focus on multichapter fics. I don't want inspiration, except for what I'm already working on!