Retribution 16

Oct 10, 2016 10:13

Retribution | NC-17

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xiulay, hunhan, baekyeol, taoris, retribution, kaisoo, suchen

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retribution is the best!!! gmende October 10 2016, 03:01:09 UTC
thanks so much for this story!

you can really weave a very compelling story that had me gripping at the edge of my seat!!!

the ending is pretty similar to what i envisioned it to be, though, i can never eloquently write it as you did.

kudos for a story so greatly written!!!

i am so looking forward for your other stories in the future :)

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RE: retribution is the best!!! purplemonsterrr October 11 2016, 08:34:35 UTC
Thank you!! <333 It was a joy and a challenge to write tbh so thanks!

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jehanakame October 10 2016, 03:23:04 UTC
Wow... can't believe this is the end....

You're amazing! Totally amazing!

They're finally free now. Although they still get works to do, they can go back to society. They have things to figure out, but they're together and that's what's important.

Thank you so much for writing and sharing this! I can't wait for the epilogue! Thank you!

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purplemonsterrr October 11 2016, 08:34:52 UTC
Thank you!

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i knEW IT queenofire October 10 2016, 03:31:42 UTC
I KNEW THEY WERENT DEAD HAHAAAAA
goodness
I HAD PREDICTED THAT THEY WERE STUCK ON A PLANET AS WELL HUHU
so well done. The wait was totally worth it lol
Maybe they'll be some short stories about the gang mastering their second powers? Who knows~
Stay well authornim!

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RE: i knEW IT purplemonsterrr October 11 2016, 08:35:14 UTC
You know I love kaisoo too much to let them die hahaha

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saemriel October 10 2016, 03:37:24 UTC
IM CRYING!!! i feel so blessed to have a chance to read this! thank you thank you so much authornim!! i wont deny it, the one month wait was frustraing on my part but i know you have your reasons and you have every right to post the next chapter whenever you want to.. im glad that you finally updated... thank you!!! thank you!!!... kaisoo saved the day! im so freaking happy!!! i never lost hope that you'll bring them back, i knew you won't kill them!! thank you!!! really just thank you for everything,,, for this... for revolution... for the special chapters after revolution (my fave was suchen... my heart ached for them... i love their story.. tho i want to know how chen finally remembered suho...ahihihihihi)

congrats authornim for another masterpiece!!! ill wait patiently for the epilogue!!!! have a nice day!!!

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purplemonsterrr October 11 2016, 08:36:11 UTC
CRIES Thank you for waiting despite that one month wait. It was very frustrating on my part too because I wanted to write but just didn't have the time. So thank you for waiting!

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saemriel October 11 2016, 14:23:42 UTC
omg no need to thank me, it was the least that i could do, its you that's gonna do the writing. at some point i was worried that you might be sick or something. im just happy that you are okay and you gave them the cure!!! OMFG!!! anyways congratulations on your upcoming wedding! enjoy your special day!

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anonymous October 10 2016, 04:39:12 UTC
I'm literally so happy rn I can't believe this ending yes yes yes it is everything i dreamed of. Omg when I started this I was like "no let me go back to Revolutions ending when everything was sort of revolved and everyone was okay for the time being" but now I'm so glad I read this until the end. I'm so happy. This, I just, I YES I LOVE THIS SO MUCH

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purplemonsterrr October 11 2016, 08:36:25 UTC
Thank you!!

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