[fanfiction] - Random 58 ficcage!

[purpleicicles]

I was just starting to think that I'd never write anything again when out of nowhere this plotbunny assaulted me on the walk to the train station after work. Quite raw and entirely unbetaed so all screw-ups are mine! Concrit appreciated!

Disclaimer: I don't own Hakkai or Gojyo. That doesn't stop me wishing I did.

“Y’know, you really are quite

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[meobnal]

“That you can hardly expect a man to live with a guy like you without becoming attracted to you.” Gojyo replied bluntly.

Too damn right, Gojyo!

[purpleicicles]

I deliberated over the use of the word 'attracted' for the longest time - I was gonna use 'attached' at first, so I'm glad that you liked this line! ^___^

[a_mael]

“I’m sorry, Gojyo?” Hakkai said, which in Hakkai-speak translated roughly to I beg your fucking pardon?

That is possibly my favourite 'Hakkai-translation' line, EVER. Beauty.

Nice little story, and I love that Gojyo's getting all pissy without realizing it, letting loose some of the frustration he's obviously been feeling for some time.

Good for the eyes at 4 in the morning!

[purpleicicles]

Wow, I'm honoured! *bows* I largely wrote the fic for that line! ;D And everybody loves whoops-I-said-too-much!Gojyo!

[purpleicicles]

Thank you!~ I was starting to worry that I'd never write again! Natural was what I was going for, so your comment really means a lot! ♥

[kansouame]

Perfect tone and dialogue between these two. Throughly enjoyed this and glad you shared it.

Kudos.. ^_^

[purpleicicles]

Thanks honey! ♥ I'm really glad it worked for you - I was honestly a bit nervous about this one, it's been so long since I last wrote anything. ^^;;;

[eyesofshinigami]

Very nicely done! I loved Gojyo's frustration and how it sort of made Hakkai stop and say, "Bwah?"

I liked the argument, but I really liked the ending. ^____^ Very cute.

Glad to see you writing again! *hugs*

[purpleicicles]

Hahaha, I should have used that exact sound! "Bwah?" would look so cute on Hakkai! :) I do like writing these two arguing, because then it gives me an excuse to write a get-back-together bit!!! *hugs back* That means a lot, honey! ♥