[fanfic] - changing part 6/8

[purpleicicles]

Argh, apologies to jessiedark for putting this up a little later than I said I would... Real Life got in the way again, and trying to type with a cat on your hand is not easy! *but still loves cat* Anyway, here's chapter 6 for your enjoyment, and as before, concrit is thoroughly encouraged - it fuels the brain

Comments

[phoenix600]

Sorry I've been a bit busy I've really been meaning to review these ones but haven't gotten around to it yet so... I shall now! :)
First off I'm really enjoying reading this story and from the looks of it cause Gojyo wasn't concentrating correctly it seems that the limiter is not being controlled and is going to try and drain *all* of his Youkai powers out not just be able to make him as he was before (like I believe the poor Kappa was hoping)
Have I mentioned before that i really love reading Youkai!Gojyo stories? if not I am now. :)
I am really looking forward to seeing where you take this story.

[purpleicicles]

I'm so pleased you're getting into this! I think you'll enjoy where I'm taking the story next *evil laugh*

[jessiedark]

Hey, it was at a good time. I'm bored bored bored at this job, there is no work here for me. I spend all day just surfing around hoping someone will post or trying to write my own Ick.

Monkey on my back is in hunt mode. I think it's expecting something . . . intense to happen next.

jessied

[purpleicicles]

I'll try not to let the monkey down! If you're bored, why not check out some webcomics? Here's a couple I like;

XKCD: http://xkcd.com/#
White Ninja: http://www.whiteninjacomics.com/
Fey winds: http://kitsune.rydia.net/index.html
Inverloch: http://www.seraph-inn.com/index.html
and
Girly: http://www.go-girly.com/

... I really shoildn't be encouraging you like this, should I?

[ashray1]

At the latest now am I trapped before my Computer from your story.(Was it all the time, but I never know what to writte, sorry)
You know how to hold someone's attention.

[purpleicicles]

Thank yoooouuuu!!! Did you get the beta I sent you?

[lillypuff]

Uh oh...I had a feeling something not so good was going to happen. Another great chapter...waiting on the edge of my seat for the next ;)

[winged_sandals]

Gojyoooo! D:

I liked how you set up this chapter, switching back and forth between the characters. That cliffhanger was just cruel though! XD

[purpleicicles]

Glad that format worked for you - I wasn't quite sure if it would sit comfortably with people. Thanks for the reassurance!