[fanfic] - changing part 5/8

[purpleicicles]

Next chappie up! Going along at a nice pace now. Thank-you to all the lovely people who have commented so far and given me ideas! In this chapter, we meet another new character, and get some plot motion going on :) Enjoy

Comments

Changing Pt 5

[geri]

I've been following this story from chapter 1 until now and it seems like goyjo would confide in hakkai since there bf's. but anyway i love the way this story is going so far so good but one thing puzzles me about wehlong he doesn't seem to be on the up and up with goyjo. I'm thinking he may or may not work for mad scientist nii out to destroy sanzo and com. I could be wrong but while observing goyjo's ring he's thinking that that ring is ugly he's not appraising the darn ring he's supposed to be making a limiter for him nothing else. so i'm awaiting the next chapter to see how everything is going to turn out.

Re: Changing Pt 5

[jessiedark]

Gojyo doesn't tell his best friend because he doesn't want to disappoint him. Gojyo doesn't believe in unconditional love/support from others, he just gives it out. Typical of an abused child who had some love and affection then lost it. Sorry I was about to tell you the defense mechanism. But not telling Hakkai makes sense.

Re: Changing Pt 5

[purpleicicles]

Given that he's a jeweller and that Gojyo's ring is pretty unconventional, I guess he's just being snooty. Really, I imagine that the only real requirement for a limiter piece is that it won't break easily, and can be taken off and replaced easily, which the ring fulfils quite nicely. Obviously I can't tell you much about Wenlong just yet, but there's definitely more of him later!

[vegeta_no_oujo]

This is going well and getting really interesting. Great job.

[jessiedark]

And. . . I'm getting all on the edge of my seat here. The monkey is making it hard to get my work done, keeps checking the computer.
Thanks for giving me something to look for besides work and reminders of bills I forgot to pay.

[purpleicicles]

Heh, I'm glad that you're enjoying this so much! Tell the monkey that the next chapter will be up tomorrow afternoon at the earliest!

[jessiedark]

ack aggg monkey thinks moving clock hands. . . will be. . . tomorrow. ...

[lillypuff]

Gah...the suspense is rising. I'm curious if the ring will be finished before someone in the Ikkou finally corners Gojyo and gets him to talk.

Can't wait for the next part!

[bloodredroses1]

Maybe I'm just paranoid but I agree w/ Ovida. Something just seems off about Wenlong.

I'm enjoying this a lot & can't wait until the next update. Sorry for the shortness of the comment.