Cracks on the Ceiling, H50, Danny/Chin, PG-13, Self Challenge Piece Five

Oct 14, 2011 18:56

Title: Cracks on the Ceiling
Author: purple_spock
Verse: H50
Pairing: Danny/Chin
Status: Established-ish
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 631
Genre: A little Angst with a bit of Fluff. Weird eh?
Disclaimer: I don’t own H50. Please don’ sue me - I’m not in the mood for hassles.
Summary: Just a bit of Danny and Chin together. Chin thinks about how his life is ( Read more... )

character: chin, post: fic, rating: pg-13, pairing: danny/chin, post: h-50 october self challenge, fathom: h-50, character: danny, genre: angst

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kare October 14 2011, 23:58:09 UTC
You? Are awesome, and so is this fic. I love both of your character, you definitely did them justice. (now I'm going to have to bug you to write more of them! heee!)

Love to you, you wonderful lady! This made my day.

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purple_spock October 15 2011, 00:00:46 UTC
Your comment is the sweetest! (And thanks for the help with editing the entry. I frequently edit the ones in my journal but didn't know I could for entries in communities.)
Thanks so much for your wonderful comment. It means a lot! And I think I may be writing more of these two. I like their dynamic.

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kare October 15 2011, 00:05:38 UTC
Oh yay! It is an interesting dynamic, and I think you captured that well.

You're welcome, btw, you're learning! =D

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purple_spock October 15 2011, 00:13:48 UTC
<3

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kitmerlot1213 October 15 2011, 00:35:42 UTC
This was just lovely!

I like the idea of Danny's being Chin's support system and that no one else realizes how close they are.

Great work on this :)

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purple_spock October 15 2011, 03:03:40 UTC
Thanks so much! I think what I like about them is that any relationship they would have would be just between them. Thanks for the nice comment!

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fatorangekat October 15 2011, 01:16:23 UTC
Oh, I really enjoyed this one. I loved your take on Chin's observations of Danny. So in voice and character, just a charming little gem of a story.

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purple_spock October 15 2011, 03:05:03 UTC
I'm so glad you thought it was in voice - I was nervous about it. Thanks so much for reading and the wonderful comment. : )

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fatorangekat October 15 2011, 03:52:30 UTC
Oh you the voice perfect. I'm really big on character and this was really awesome.

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purple_spock October 15 2011, 04:22:46 UTC
Thank you so much. I'm just endless smiles now. : D

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redfish_123 October 15 2011, 01:34:44 UTC
excellent!

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purple_spock October 15 2011, 03:05:43 UTC
Thank! : D

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fuflowers October 15 2011, 08:05:28 UTC
I'm usually a McDanno kind of gal, but this? This is all kinds of love and wonderfulness and there needs to be MORE Chin/Danny.

Such a wonderful little snapshot of these two together. I love how solid and in character you make them feel. Excellent job.

Thank you for sharing!

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purple_spock October 15 2011, 20:17:10 UTC
This was the nicest comment to read! I'm so glad that you liked it, especially since this isn't your usually pairing. Thanks so much for your kind words and for reading. : D

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