a Fugue

Nov 03, 2010 01:47

Title: (a Fugue)
Fandom/pairing: Inception, Ariadne/Mal
Summary: Ariadne doesn't know what it's like to be one half of a whole.
Notes: This is actually a very small snippet. It wants to be something huge and more... well, fugue-ish, but I cannot make it be what it wants. Someone else maybe could, I don't know. Anyways, it's for this kinkmeme ( Read more... )

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iambickilometer November 4 2010, 00:13:27 UTC
this is fantastic. Just letting you know.

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purple_chalk November 4 2010, 18:00:28 UTC
Aww, grma~

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alostcorner November 5 2010, 15:15:15 UTC
Aaaaugh, this is a perfect combination of creepy and porny and melancholy. And that last line is perfect *___*

I think it's great the way it is, an isolated moment that certainly hints at being a part of something bigger. But hey, if you ever come back and find yourself writing more, I'll be more than happy to read it :)

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purple_chalk November 5 2010, 21:27:54 UTC
Thank you! I'm sort of toying with the idea of expanding it into something a little broader, but there's not much of a ...plot. As such. Anyways I'm delighted that you like it as it is!

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zoi_no_miko November 9 2010, 07:14:55 UTC
Oooh, this is lovely and eerie and hot all at once - glad that I managed to find it! Very nicely done.

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purple_chalk November 9 2010, 19:18:47 UTC
Thank you, glad you liked it!

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