If the Thrill Is Gone

May 04, 2012 19:35

Title: If the Thrill Is Gone
Rating: PG-13
Wordcount: 1200
Disclaimer: Not my boys. Kripke broke them long before I ever got to them.
Summary: Dean and John, the morning after Dean quit highschool. It doesn't go as Dean expected.

Here, have some good-daddy!John for a change. Yeah, I don't even know...


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oneshot, dean, supernatural, sort of almost fluff, preseries, john, teen!chesters

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cassiopeia7 May 4 2012, 18:02:28 UTC
“Don’t need a diploma to handle a gun.” He grins back, shaking his head and Dean is just gonna tell himself that he’s imagining the tint of sadness in his eyes.

Wow, that line was wrenching. John does care about what Mary wanted. And Dean knows it. Even when John is being a good dad, my heart still gets squeezed.

Bravo, you.

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purple_carpets May 5 2012, 11:15:10 UTC
Well, I never promised happy fic. lol, I think I might be physically incapable of producing something completely angst free.

:)

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borgmama1of5 May 4 2012, 18:29:14 UTC
Totally not what I--or Dean--anticipated from John.

Thank you.

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purple_carpets May 5 2012, 11:17:14 UTC
Heh, not what I expected either ^^

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juppschmitz May 4 2012, 18:53:07 UTC
purple_carpets May 5 2012, 12:46:16 UTC
Well, I feel like even when I write him as borderline abusive, there's still a good guy buried under all the anger and fear, so writing good daddy!John wasn't even that far of a stretch. I've done it before, I just generally tend to gravitate towards scenarios where he's at his lowest of low points because...*shrugs*

Aw, I know. I have all these little plot bunnies for awesome!Mary fic. It's not that she would have been the most awesome mom ever, it's really more about how different John would have been with her around...

Also? Alec!Dean is awesome. I'm not gonna use some fugly Brock Kelly icon. ^^

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ficwriter1966 May 4 2012, 19:04:32 UTC
That's just gorgeous. So atmospheric, so true to the characters. I can almost smell the burgers cooking! Thanks for sharing. :)

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purple_carpets May 5 2012, 12:56:38 UTC
Aw, thank you so much. I'm super easily influenced by the weather. I can't write summer fics when it's cold outside and as soon as we have a heatwave I can only write stuff like this xD

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antrazi May 4 2012, 20:26:40 UTC
certainly a surprising reactiom from John. Really enjoyed that

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purple_carpets May 5 2012, 12:57:57 UTC
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it :)

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