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Please, Daddy (Don't Get Drunk This Christmas)

Dec 28, 2011 01:26

Title: Please, Daddy (Don't Get Drunk This Christmas)
Rating: PG-13
Wordcount: 1400
Disclaimer: Not my boys. Kripke broke them long before I ever got to them.
Summary: John does his best to keep his promise, but that doesn't make their Christmas any better.

So, I'm supposed to be writing a couple of birthday fics, but they're being incredibly stubborn ( Read more... )

oneshot, wee!chesters, did i just hurt sammy?, commentfic, preseries, john, angst, angst_bingo, hurt/comfort, dean, hc_bingo, supernatural, hurting dean is like crack to me, sam

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verucasalt123 December 28 2011, 02:01:35 UTC

My heart is broken. You are fantastic.

purple_carpets December 28 2011, 12:43:31 UTC

*wraps you up in blankets*

purple_carpets December 28 2011, 12:43:13 UTC

Uhm...see, it's not even what I wanted to write, so...

I like this John too. He's just really, really bad at this father gig and he knows he's doing a bad job, but he can't allow himself to stop and think about it. He really needs a Mary. *hugs all of them*

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lexophilia December 28 2011, 02:24:51 UTC

Great story :)

purple_carpets December 28 2011, 12:44:29 UTC

Thanks :)

tcs1121 December 28 2011, 03:24:50 UTC

My heart. She breaks.

Tiny red pieces of bloody tissue are speckling my computer keyboard.

You have broken me. You are awesome.

purple_carpets December 28 2011, 12:47:23 UTC

LOL

I'd help you wipe up the mess, but seriously, life without a heart is so much more fun. ;)

tcs1121 December 29 2011, 01:20:18 UTC

Just to register emotion-- jealousy, devotion, and really feel the part. I could stay young and chipper. And I'd lock it with a zipper.

If I only had a heart.

*shit*

This isn't fun at all...

borgmama1of5 December 28 2011, 03:45:23 UTC

This is certainly a true possibility that it went this way.

But it makes me very sad.

purple_carpets December 28 2011, 12:48:15 UTC

There should be some kind of rule against muses coming up with sad wee!chester bunnies this time of year, I know...

lies_unfurl December 28 2011, 05:19:24 UTC

...welp, that was depressing. And very well-written, as always. You really made me feel for Dean, and all of the burdens that have been placed on his shoulders. John also has his fair share of crap to deal with, and I can feel bad for him for that (although it doesn't excuse him being a lousy father).

Also, I think you cut part of this off when you posted it! You forgot to include the happy ending, where John tells the motel manager off, puts a blissfully sleepy Sam to bed, and then hugs Dean. You just can't forget that!

purple_carpets December 28 2011, 12:50:16 UTC

Trololol. How did that happen? LJ acting up again, most likely. ;)