To Try and Break Me Down

[purple_carpets]

Title: To Try and Break Me Down
Rating: R
Wordcount: 5100
Disclaimer: Not my boys. Kripke broke them long before I ever got to them.
Summary: John thinks he’s teaching Dean to fully consider the consequences of his actions, but Dean is slowly twisting and turning it into something completely different.

Warnings: Abuse, buckets worth of angst, John

Comments

[lunasky3]

Fucked up Daddy issues Dean is my favorite Dean. Guh. ♥ Also I love your John because he has NO idea how to handle Dean. Dark and twisty and amazing ♥

[purple_carpets]

fucked up Daddy Issues Dean is one of the best Deans out there ;)

[biketest]

Dean is the biggest kicked puppy in history. I love how we don't see his POV here and don't know exactly what's going on in his head only that it's super fucked up. You are seriously the goddess of daddy issues.

[purple_carpets]

Heh, I think that was probably my biggest problem writing this. Even I wasn't sure what exactly was going on in Dean's head. But I guess I don't really need to know, seeing as it's all from John's POV.

[brassband777]

Oh my - this was heartbreaking! You did an amazing job with that really challenging prompt. My heart just went out to Dean and I was mentally screaming at John all the way through! It was so sad that Dean had to go to such lengths to get his dad's attention :( This was really well written.

[purple_carpets]

Aw, thank you so much :)

YMKTM

[brassband777]

Why did I not understand Dean's floppiness until I read your comment? Lol, *sigh*. Makes hella sense though.

Re: YMKTM

[brassband777]

I'm glad you found my comment useful. Hee hee. Normally i think my comments come across as a load of waffle. lol.

[lilja82]

Awesome:)

[purple_carpets]

:)

[capricorn86]

Not a story I`d normally read, but I enjoy your writing style in this one. Great job.

[purple_carpets]

I'm glad you decided to read it anyway. And even more glad you ended up liking it ;)