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Gonna Know Where You've Been

Dec 04, 2011 20:31

Title: Gonna Know Where You've Been
Rating: NC-17
Wordcount: 3600
Disclaimer: Not my boys. Kripke broke them long before I ever got to them.
Summary: It's just your run-of-the-mill fuck-or-die curse. It shouldn't be a problem for two brother's who've been fucking each other for years. Except for the part where Dean hasn't had sex since he came back ( Read more... )

oneshot, this doesn't seem to be gen, angst, dean, hurt/comfort, supernatural, hc_bingo, alastair, hurting dean is like crack to me, sam

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lunasky3 December 4 2011, 19:52:29 UTC

Everything is princess_aleera's fault. Can't say I'm too upset about this outcome though.

BOYYSSSSSSSSS *wraps Dean in layers and layers of blankets*

purple_carpets December 5 2011, 18:23:10 UTC

well, of course it is. she's evil. I'm so glad you like what came of it :)

verucasalt123 December 6 2011, 02:48:49 UTC

I would also like to sign up in the "princess_aleera is evil" camp. Just for the hell of it.

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purple_carpets December 5 2011, 18:23:38 UTC

Hee, if only I didn't enjoy hurting them so much :P

somer December 4 2011, 21:31:43 UTC

This is...oh man. So, so good. So much love for this. So many things in there that I freaking loved. Dean actually admitting that he was raped in hell and saying it out loud, the reason why he won't top in the near future, curled up in a fetal position by the headboard...and the tears and the blushing!

"'sitover?" he tries to ask, the words tiny and shivering, betraying the tears that are running down his cheeks. ...awwwww, this just broke me a little bit.

Perfect :)

purple_carpets December 5 2011, 18:35:35 UTC

wow, thank you so much. I have a thing for the boys talking about hell. Like...talking. Out loud. There needs to be S7 fic about them comparing emotional scars. lol, maybe they will have to be high for that conversation, but still...

biketest December 5 2011, 00:01:49 UTC

You wrote this sex scene very well! This was probably some of the best traumatized!Dean I have ever read. I love that you addressed the fact that if Dean was raped in hell, he probably raped a lot of people too. I don't think I've read a fic that mentions that before.

Also, jsyk, you switched around letters in a few places: paragraph 4: 'dumbfuonded' should be 'dumbfounded' and later '"What'd I wanna talk about?" he craoks' should be 'croaks'.

purple_carpets December 5 2011, 18:38:58 UTC

lol, thanks so much. I have no confidence in my ability to write sex scenes whatsoever.

I always got the feeling that the part Dean really couldn't live with was what he did in hell, not necessarily what was done to him and since he's made several comments about how torture pretty much equals rape...yeah.

borgmama1of5 December 5 2011, 01:38:49 UTC

Yikes, this was excruciating...in that let's hurt Dean some more way...

Would love to see Sam's POV on this.

purple_carpets December 5 2011, 18:39:34 UTC

Let's hurt Dean some more is the unofficial motto of this journal ;)