Man in the Shadow

Jun 27, 2011 22:55

Title: Man in the Shadow
Rating: PG.-13
Wordcount: 1200
Disclaimer: Not my boys. Kripke broke them long before I ever got to them.
Summary: Dean's run-in with a crazy preacher sets off his memories of hell.
Written for a prompt by supernoodle77  on the Dean focused h/c comment fic meme #4 on hoodie_time  and as a fill for 'Religion' on my angst_bingo  card.
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oneshot, commentfic, bobby, angst, angst_bingo, dean, hurt/comfort, supernatural, alastair, sort of almost fluff, hurting dean is like crack to me, sam

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honeylocusttree June 27 2011, 22:42:37 UTC
Yum!

Lovely. ;)

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purple_carpets June 28 2011, 16:57:33 UTC
Thanks.

Pretty, hurt Dean is hurt and pretty ;)

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jesseofthenorth June 28 2011, 04:03:47 UTC
Holy crap this badboy has got some sharp edges doesn't it? Nice work! Gave me the shivers in a couple of places. :D

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purple_carpets June 28 2011, 16:58:21 UTC
Hee. Thanks so much. You're right, it does kinda feel like a sharp teeth kinda fill :P

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tcs1121 June 28 2011, 11:01:10 UTC
The way kindness can be torture too.

Ouch. Horrible and sad. And Sam trying so hard but just hurting Dean more.

Have I ever told you recently how good you are at this?

Dean is not safe around you.

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purple_carpets June 28 2011, 17:00:40 UTC
Have I ever told you recently how good you are at this?
Not recently, no. You may keep telling me, if you want :)

And yes, Dean isn't safe around me. At all. His own fault he's so pretty when he's hurt though. And hey, five more fics to go and I can finally focus on my h/c card where he'll at least have someone trying to make it all better.

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maypoles June 28 2011, 20:21:03 UTC
This is EXCELLENT.

It's one of my fave flavours of h/c, but I also just adore your writing style, the short, sharply-worded lines and sections. They're really effective. And ahhhh, that ending. <3

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purple_carpets June 29 2011, 06:09:48 UTC
Aw, thanks so much. I'm kinda in love with the ending too. Sometimes my muse will just come up with random phrases that she insists I put in the fic (and she has a knife and these huge scary eyes, so I usually do as she says) XD

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maypoles June 29 2011, 13:21:31 UTC
I'm really big on endings, and I love this one. ;)

Also, pls excuse my absentmindedness - do you/I have this linked in the meme masterlist?

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purple_carpets June 29 2011, 13:37:16 UTC
omg, I totally suck! I forgot to comment with the link! I'll do it in a minute.

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faelani June 29 2011, 03:04:23 UTC
MM.. I love all your fics. You've very good at making everything hurt so good in all the right ways and places.

Also, This part: "Hell. It used to Sam's nightmares, then his visions." It needs a verb. :)

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purple_carpets June 29 2011, 06:11:03 UTC
Hee. Thanks so much, making everything hurt so good in all the right ways and places. is exactly what I'm going for ;)

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