Black Clouds

[purple_carpets]

Title: Black Clouds
Rating: PG-13
Wordcount: 1100
Disclaimer: Not my boys. Kripke broke them long before I ever got to them.
Summary: Back when Dean was in the pit, Alastair put a trigger in his head. Now, at some vague point post-S6, it's time for Dean to start torturing again.

Alastair POV because, well, because I'm sick. Also, if

Comments

[irismay42]

Holy crap!!

Sooo much more the show could have done with Dean and Alastair's twisted relationship. Although I'm kinda glad Sam offed him when he did, just in case this ever happened!

[purple_carpets]

Well, yeah, Alastair could have done too much damage to be left alive, but...but...but I WANT HIM BACK! I miss him so much. I'm still hoping for him to return for the s7 opener...

[maypoles]

Wow. WOW.

Thank-you so much for writing my prompt. When I thought of it, I totally wasn't expecting him to go for Sam, but of course that makes so much sense and is just so heartbreaking and horrible and perfect. And that ending... oh man, I can't even. Is there any chance you could be compelled to write more of this in the future? In any case, it's a great cliffhanger, and a great fic. Thanks again.

[purple_carpets]

Hee. There's always a chance, yes. We'll see what prompts my h/c card can come up with.

I'm really glad you like my fill. My brain scares me sometimes, because apparently the moment I try to write bad guy POV it has to be 2nd person oO

[maypoles]

<3 <3 <3

[biketest]

WHAT!?! HOLY SHIT. omgomgomg. This is like the most freaky, hurty, messed-up thing I've read in a long time. I CAN'T BELIEVE HE TORTURED SAMMY that's like the last thing I would have thought. I thought Sam was gonna get free and stop Dean and then we could have some comfort with our hurt.
But then... the last line. ;_;

[purple_carpets]

Hey, I wasn't expecting him to go for Sam either. No idea when he decided to do that. And no idea where that last line came from. Muse-y was in a strange mood ;)

[purple_carpets]

The part that's even more messed up is that there's apparently nothing I enjoy quite as much as writing bag guy POV. First CrotchGuy, no Alastair...

Hee, I had a out 5 different totally random trigger phrases before I picked that one. I really liked the girls scout trying to sell them cookies, but then I didn't know how to get rid of her in time, because somehow I'm not quite messed up enough to have Dean torture a little girl.

That last line is...yeah, idek.

[purple_carpets]

Heh. She's usually covered in blood and cackling like crazy. But don't be scared of her. Mostly she doesn't bite.

I just re-watched that S2 (S3? It was oooold) FRIENDS episode, where Ross accidentally breaks the cookie girl scout's leg and I really, really, really wanted to use that particular girl and have her be all freaked out and wide eyed and 'are you sure you're alright, sir?' when Dean's eyes go blank and he reverts back to torturer mode. Ah well, I still have the image in my head.

[verucasalt123]

WOW wow wow omg, I don't know what to say. Except "more please".

[purple_carpets]

NoOOOOOooo, people are asking for sequels again? Uh...maaayybe. Depending on what squares show up on my h/c card.