soaked [02/03]

Jan 10, 2011 12:30

soaked (part two of three)
dooseung, junseung. angst (maybe?), romance. 2525 words. au. m.
doojoon's not sure what came over him when he decided to befriend the homeless boy, but whatever it was, he's thankful for it. (a.k.a: the story of a beggar and a law student.)
notes: i'm so sorry this wasn't up earlier ;~; i broke my keyboard, so i couldn't ( Read more... )

pairing: hyunseung/junhyung, pairing: doojoon/hyunseung, rating: m/pg-15, !fanfic, band/artist: beast

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bambi_rancho January 10 2011, 05:32:04 UTC
oh no.
hyunseung knows that doojoon has feelings for him?
and yeah, cliff hanger.
an awesome way to end this cause im dying to know what will happen next. keke.

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purple_banjo January 10 2011, 06:21:53 UTC
haha ^^ the cliffhanger wasn't even intentional. i just didn't have anywhere else to end it. :P
thanks for reading and commenting. ♥

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akinoyui January 10 2011, 05:45:49 UTC
arghh!!
I felt like pulling my hair out >.<
I wanna know what Hyunseung meant. I can't wait for you to update this! This is so cool and interesting!! Thanks for updating us! It's not crappy, don't worry!

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purple_banjo January 10 2011, 06:27:39 UTC
i understand your frustration XD although my frustration comes from a broken keyboard, so yeah. not quite the same thing. :P
really? i was worried about posting this, but i figured it was better than nothing. i'm glad you think it's not crappy ^^
thanks so much for reading and commenting. C: ♥

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countrymir January 10 2011, 08:00:22 UTC
stunning fic just like i expected. i had been checking the comm for an update for the past few days so i'm extremely happy you updated. i don't know why you're hating on your writing when its really good.

the plot is being developed at a good pace and there isn't any rushing or too slow a pace. and you're developing it just right, its the same plot with different aspects pertaining to it.

can't wait for the final piece to this fic :D
i'm actually sad that it's gonna be over already. the idea was a really great one so it stuck with me throughout this whole time because it was plenty different from whats out there now :D

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purple_banjo January 10 2011, 11:16:33 UTC
oh wow, thank you so much. i'm glad it has lived up to your expectations thus far ^^ i suppose i've just never been all that confident or something. idk.
yay, i kind of feel like less of a failure now. i almost thought it was moving too slow, and then too fast toward the end :\
i'm sad too :C i'm really loving the BEAST fandom. everyone's really nice and supportive and the boys are so much fun to write ^^
thank you so much for reading and commenting. :D ♥

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anonymous January 10 2011, 08:24:02 UTC
jkfhgjadhlafkdj fracking hyunseung he's messing with doojoon's and my mind and djgkjdafhlagk i'm not really liking it!!!! why?!?!?!? why is taking advantage of doojoon like that!!!?!?! akjgajdfgldaj why is he still with junhyung in here?!?!?! and why in the world does he kiss doojoon at the end?!?!?! dgfkajglhkjfg graaaaah.....this kind of hyunseung is making me a little mad!!! hul~!!! but gahfjagaa doojoon is a prince~

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purple_banjo January 10 2011, 11:21:54 UTC
'SUP ANON?
um hi. ekrhjy9t50eop4ktrjtkl i know :C it all sucks, doojoon is lovely, and hyunseung is a confusing brat ><
BUT NEVER FEAR, ANON, YOUR QUESTIONS SHALL BE ANSWERED AND THE ANSWERS QUESTIONED IN PART THREE!
thanks for reading and commenting ♥ loljk, you're anon and i hate you

jsyk, i was kidding. i don't hate you. i love you, anon :D

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purple_banjo January 10 2011, 14:40:00 UTC
OMG SORRYYYYYY D: i hope you did well on your exams, though. ^^
i'll get part three up asap.
thanks for commenting! :D ♥♥

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