CRITIQUE

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CRITIQUE POST

If you're looking for some input or opinions on your characterization, then you've come to the right post.

If you're looking for critique, list your character names and their journals. Anonymous replies are allowed as responses, so keep that in mind

Comments

[walktodawn]

Riku, walktodawn
Ahiru, slackiness

and if anyone wants to catch him before I drop him...

Laliku Safir, wishingrose

[rosewishes]

omfg I fail.

rosewishes, not wishingrose. @__@

[walktodawn]

Riku is one of those characters sooo easy to mess up from what I've seen in other games. You do a great job with him. He goes all out for the people he loves, and while he might be a little awkward with making new friends, he's not one to just brush people aside (the way younger-him might have~). I haven't seen him emo too much, which is always good, too and a big mistake most Riku players seem to make.

Great job, hun. Keep up the good work!!

[walktodawn]

o-omg, thanks. ;~; ♥

[glamorousknight]

OMG. YOU DON'T KNOW HOW MUCH I NEEDED THIS. DX

Zelos → glamorousknight
Diva → haunting_voice
Momiji → cutebunnykun [to whom needs to get updated like WHOA. :D;;;]

I'm not putting Woldwood up since, well...I just took him up. :/

[a_failed_god]

It's hard for me to say because the only character whose fandom I know is Momiji, but I do have to say that Zelos, though I've not interacted with him very much at all, always makes me smile with his updates. He's really adorable.

Honestly, if I had any crit at all, it's that I wish we saw you around more. ♥ But that's as much my failing for not following that side of things as well as I really should.

[crosses_n_gunz]

...bahahaha. The joys of him being comic relief. ♥

That's the exact critique I was expecting. Which is why I plan on spamming journals with all of them. That is, once I bring Diva back. D:

And I fail SO hard for not noticing my typo with Wolfwood. DDX

[sniping_targets]

I love Momiji. There's nothing else for me to say, just that I absolutely adore him. Had to get that in.

[kagami2k]

Get Backers:

Kagami kagami2k

[kagami2k]

Thanks. XD I'll plot furiously to make that happen.

[virtualunknown]

I loooove your Kagami. XD I was thinking for a little while he was a tiny bot more carefree than I'd remembered, but then reading more of the manga... you're spot on. XD *thumbs up*

[strike_snake]

I've been very self consious about whether I'm IC or OOC so I'd love for opinions, even bad ones ^ ^

Orochimaru strike-snake
Shikamaru shika-shadow
Kero-chan okashi-no-uta

[strike_snake]

To be honest, I'm afraid to have characters interact with your interpretation of Orochimaru. I've always been a huge fan of him, and some of the things he says, that you've presented, I can't see him saying. Orochimaru isn't one to overindulge in what is going on in his life, he's always presented me in a way that is secretive, calm, suave, with bouts of anger when people really get him going. He isn't one to complain about being bored, but instead will entertain himself.

Also, Orochimaru isn't one to just talk to anyone, or allow others to do things to him, but is very specific about who-whats-and-whens. I'm saying this as someone who has seen how Orochimaru is presented in many ways, and these are some of the constants that I've seen.

That's all I really have to say on all of them.

None on Shikamaru and Kerberos, as I haven't watched them at all.

[strike_snake]

Good point, I never thought of it that way. To be honest myself, I haven't really been into it at the moment (due to real life) so I did figure I might've made them a little ooc a couple of times. I'll have to work on him a bit ^ ^;;; I guess I'm still a bit of a newbie too.

Thank you for your comment ^ ^ I'll keep what you've said in mind.

[strike_snake]

I'm sure once you give the muse more time, you'll settle right into him. ♥

[thirdethpada]

Weee~ Opinions are luffed upon :O

Kira Izuru submissi0n
Nel Tu thirdethpada

[thirdethpada]

I absolutely love your Nel. I just wanted to say this. Kira is well done, as well. But Nel, I don't know, there's just something cute and charming about the way you portray her.

[thirdethpada]

Oh, wow *~* Thank you so much!

[wearsacurtain]

♥