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Returning (Chapter 16)

Apr 12, 2008 12:59

Title: Returning (Chapter 16)
Author: Purerose
Fandom: NCIS
Prompt: 017 Weapon
Character/Pairing: Kate/Gibbs
Rating: PG
Word Count: 991
Summary: Kate retuns to work.
Authors Notes/Disclaimer: I think that this may actually be the shortest chapter I've written for this so far. It was a little bit longer but I cut out some bits that were bugging me ( Read more... )

Comments 7

dani101 April 12 2008, 12:38:06 UTC

I can say only one thing-if that is 'basic training' I want to go too.:)

'and you are pleased to see that you were just a fraction to the left of the centre....You have your gun back within two weeks.'
With that teacher I can pass the training too.:PGreat update.:)

lynna12000 April 12 2008, 14:31:35 UTC

Part 16 was good. Part 17 would make help me fight my cold even more diligently. Gibbs...gun...target practice...(happy place).

purerose April 12 2008, 14:48:54 UTC

Heh, glad you enjoyed it.

Part 17 is getting a work over right now, my tenses are terribly screwy in the first draft and it usually takes about three going-overs to catch them all.

I'll do what I can to get it up soon, for the sake of your health of course ;)

lynna12000 April 12 2008, 19:47:31 UTC

Thank you. The cold germs are trembling in fear. They are laughing because they got my vocal cords first, but they are afraid.

citymusings April 12 2008, 20:34:29 UTC

Nicely done. I'm glad to see the two new chapters. I hope we'll see more soon - and more of Kibbs...I'm not sure I like the new guy - at least not with Kate. ;)

xdawnfirex April 13 2008, 12:50:52 UTC

This is really interesting. I've never seen this story before. I'm curious as to whether it's a sequel to something, because I feel like I'm missing a great deal of backstory. I'm interested to know how Kate came to be still alive and where she was. If this has already been written, can you link me? Thanks!

purerose April 13 2008, 13:27:43 UTC

This story actually started out as a one shot (which is now a later chapter which should be posted soon). It's not a sequel, it's basically an AU set after Twilight. It's not explicitly stated but the general idea is that Kate was put into some kind of Witness Protection type programme. It's left fairly open as to what happened before though.

I've written bits into other chapters but they've not all been posted yet. Once I've got the whole story posted I want to post the extra bits that I wrote but left out of the actual story.

:D

Thanks for reading it, it's great that you're enjoying it and I hope it's not too confusing :D