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purejabberwocky

Beauty is Relative, Babe. 1/?

Jul 31, 2010 16:57

Thought it was about time to put this up.

Title Beauty is Relative, Babe.
Genre Angst/Hurt/Comfort/Romance
Pairing US/UK
Rating M overall for disturbing content and sensitive topics.
Chapter Rating G
Warnings Fluff so thick, it might be potent. Readers have been warned.

( It had only been a little over eight weeks since that fateful evening, and America found he had never been happier. )

angst, fanfiction, us/uk, hurt/comfort

Comments 6

ninjasneaky August 1 2010, 03:21:59 UTC

I liked it :) it was nice and not out of character in the slightest. America can be the contemplative type too you know ;)

galeaya August 1 2010, 05:18:32 UTC

oh oh it's a deanon! <3 I was following it at the meme.. -sniff- love this.. ;A;

arthal August 1 2010, 09:15:18 UTC

Oh, it's you! I loved this fill on the kinkmeme. It's great. :)

aki_yasu August 1 2010, 11:36:40 UTC

the fluff! i luffs it. i think the world needs more fluff, yes? :DDD <3 <3
they're so natural, too. X3 and this--> America nuzzled into his side and tried to brush away the niggling sense of alarm that seemed to crawl under his skin. <-- LOVE this line (though it set my alarm bells ringing too xD;; *fears a bit*)

ren_chan146 August 1 2010, 15:04:09 UTC

Pretty good writing skills you have. It's the first time in years that I foud a fanfiction I had difficulties to understand. (not because of your writing just because english isn't my mother tongue.^^)
I liked it a lot. And your characterisation was pretty good too. I'm curious about the next chapter.
I hope we don't have to wait too long.^^