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the GazettE - Unworthy to Love - DRABBLE

Dec 17, 2007 22:41

Title: Unworthy to Love
Band: the GazettE
Author: Reila
Genre: Angst
Rating: PG-13?
Pairings: Onesided Reita/Uruha; implied Reita/Aoi
Summary: You were constantly there for me whenever I was down, willing to pick up the broken pieces that had fallen. Why was I so blind? [Uruha's POV]
Comments: This was...written for a friend. I hurt her and I ( Read more... )

reita x uruha, oneshot, the gazette, fanfiction

Comments 21

lady_akira December 18 2007, 12:56:17 UTC

oh, that was pretty good, though i don't like the idea of reita & aoi together ,__, and i hope with you & your friend everything will be ok.

puppets_corpse December 18 2007, 13:04:10 UTC

askljdf Your icon is adorable~ ;~;

Thank you for reading, though~! I like the Rei/Aoi pairing, but I know Rei/Uru will forever be one of my OTPs~

Seems like my pairings like being switched up on me lately. @-@ I've been bouncing from pairing to pairing. [Last week, it was Ruki/Aoi. xD]

Thank you for your nice words and comment~!

desastreparfait December 18 2007, 13:09:13 UTC

Oh that was so beautiful. Sad but beautiful. -applauds and dramatically whips out a tissue to dab away tears-

Even though I like ReitaxAoi more than ReitaxUruha, I feel really sorry for Uruha in this fic. ;____;

puppets_corpse December 20 2007, 01:12:14 UTC

-Giggles and bows.- Thank you for the comment~! I'm sorry it was sad, though. D:

jklas Gosh, so do I and I was the one that wrote it. ;~;

anonymous December 18 2007, 20:44:36 UTC

so sweet... is sad how we are so blind sometimes...
oh, and I really like your writing! if this is your first time writing in this style then I should... m(_ _)m
Thanks for sharing!

puppets_corpse December 20 2007, 01:13:14 UTC

Even though you may not get this, thank you so much for commenting! It's good to know that my first attempt at writing first person succeeded~

You're very welcome!

insentient_doll December 19 2007, 16:24:34 UTC

I think that this can pass as a drabble [albeit a long one at that] since the piece has nearly 500 words. But in those nearly 500 words you have managed to capture something essential: how humans can sometimes take people important to them for granted, and then only realize their worth later on when they're gone. It's a sad situation, but it happens all the time u_u ( ... )

puppets_corpse December 21 2007, 06:39:43 UTC

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I'm glad that I able to capture that; I used my own personal experience to add to it and, though I wasn't necessarily in Uruha's exact position, I still took someone for granted. D: It's sad that it happens so often.

I've tried so hard to put some of my past experiences in here [Uruha wanting to impersonate Aoi] and I'm glad that it was able to add to the overall situation within my drabble~! Again, I'm glad that you commented and told me what you thought! [And thank you for telling me it's a drabble. I don't have a writing program that does a word count. (ToT;)] It's good to know that my first attempt at first person POV went well~! n-n I will definately continue to write~