[X] 100 Fubaru Themes (012 & 013)

[puppe]

Two drabbles this time. 012 was rather refreshing to write, though it was useless filler space, it seemed. 013 seemed to drag out forever when it was originally planned to be light and quick; it's an important drabble in the series, though. Hmm, there seem to be a few cornerstones planned out with the rest of it being just filler crap. ...Kind

Comments

[starswan]

Silence is annoying...in that it grows deeper making it increasingly more difficult to act...the longer it is drawn out.
I like how you emulate how they think about things and analyze and then fret over what they find..the characters...though they still frequently..even though they know what is amiss...neglect to act despite newfound wisdom.

Hmm. You like to use the adjective "cruel" to describe Fuuma. ...though from Subaru's perspective that makes sense. I feel like I can climb into the head of either one and have it make sense.
And I like how Fuuma veils things in terms of Subaru's "wish". Because it's not like he wanted to kiss him or anything. ;) that could be why it's "cruel" but I think that Fuuma was being...benevolently opportunistic. Maybe.

I liked it a lot. These last four drabbles have intrigued me..your insights into human behavior.. and the style is enjoyable.

[puppe]

I like how you emulate how they think about things and analyze and then fret over what they find..the characters...though they still frequently..even though they know what is amiss...neglect to act despite newfound wisdom.

Kind of like real people, right? 8DDDDD

Well, I guess "cruel" fits Fuuma sometimes, in a sense. I don't know. Maybe I'll use the term "benevolently opportunistic" next time, hmm? ;)

But thank you very much for your comments! They're not really insights, though. Just filler thoughts as I try to get to something else, haha! Always glad to hear about my style, though ;) Thanks!

But yes, Mr. Bird, Subaru's other "wish" is to be tied up. >;D

[starswan]

(my thought trains show up on time :P, they merely linger at the station refusing to let any passengers on board. :PPP)

Kind of like real people, right? 8DDDDD

Kind of. :)

Well, I guess "cruel" fits Fuuma sometimes, in a sense. I don't know. Maybe I'll use the term "benevolently opportunistic" next time, hmm? ;)

Are you poking fun at my colorful modifiers ? ;) For some reason Fuuma's talking of granting Subaru's "wish" struck me as an...opportunity.
However, I do honestly think he believes that there is some purpose to his wish granting. This one just happened to coincide with...kissing Subaru. XD

Kamui/DoE: Hey...you know...I can divine people's thoughts and see the manifestation of their deepest desires. Would you like me to grant your "wish" for you

[puppe]

Well, I don't think that Fuuma didn't enjoy Subaru's wish!

And I love your little script bits XD