[Yami no Matsuei/X] Thirty-Eight

[puppe]

Title: Thirty-Eight
Author: Elf Asato
Written: July 25 - August 3, 2005
Summary: Pre-series crossover with X. There are thirty-eight tiles on the ceiling in Hisoka's hospital room.
Disclaimer: X belongs to CLAMP and Yami no Matsuei to Yoko Matsushita.
Notes: For finmefiant. Errors in both series. Somewhat dark.

Thirty-Eight
By Elf Asato

Kurosaki Hisoka

Comments

[mefiant]

:D I really like this! Thank you! I love the creepy atmosphere... Unfortunately I have to go now, so no long review for you at the moment, but I'll come back later and actually put some effort into it. ^_^

[ryutsuki]

yay~!

I need to get a Yuuto icon

[mefiant]

You thought I'd forgotten to come back, didn't you? Didn't you?!

:D

Anyway, this feedback so totally won't be worth the wait, but here we go...

I really love the inclusion of Tomoe; it's a really clever way of doing a crossover. The whole thirty-eight thing was an excellent way of bringing it together. It has that kind of feverish creepiness I associate with being truly ill, which obviously fits Hisoka very well. It was also very cool when you said Tomoe didn't change (just like the tiles!). The comparison of Tomoe (and Yuuto) to thirty-eight was sort of subtle, in a very good way. :D I also thought it was cool how Yuuto kept apologising. It just seemed a very Yuuto-ish thing to do.

You should write a Yuuto/Tomoe fic *hintnudgehint*

You do.

[ryutsuki]

NO :P
Actually, yes I had ^^;;

But thank you ^____^ The whole thirty-eight thing was just a whim, and it became a theme for structure. But...to tell you the truth, I'm not entirely sure what was up with Yuuto! It could be a lot of things, hmmm :D Thank you again, though!

.............After Seishirou/Yuuto (omg sexy guy um, sex), and Seishirou/Yuuri (omg camilla-lovin'-cherry-assassin/baseball-obsessed-demon-king-kid-in-another-world love), though :D