[YnM/X] Thirty-Eight

[puppe]

For finmefiant. It's not finished, but I just got too tired....

Kurosaki Hisoka knew exactly how many ceiling tiles his hospital room had: thirty-eight.
He'd counted it many times, over and over again - always thirty-eight. Never thirty-seven or thirty-nine, but thirty-eight. He knew this because he had spent who-knows-how- long on his hospital bed

Comments

[starswan]

Wow. Spiffy. I am tired and incoherent but that was intriguing. Poor Hisoka. I don't like hospitals either.
I liked the rest of the fic but my brain kept going back to those tiles. *_*

And not a tile more.

:o

Actually, I like hospitals...

[ryutsuki]

I just noticed it, but it's every other section I reference the thirty-eight thing (but it's, like, four sections, so XD).

[mefiant]

*squishles* I really like that! Stories in hospitals are always really vivid for me - I have no idea why. The detail about the tiles is great, because it emphasises a) the boredom and b) the illness. I always get weird, spacey, obsessed thoughts like that when I'm ill.

You also made Yuuto seems really sexy - not that he isn't always, but, um, in an understated way this time. I liked it when he kissed Tomoe; you know how I feel about sibling incest... :O

:D

[ryutsuki]

Thank you! I'm glad you really like it (because it would suck if you didn't because it's your fic-thingy)!

Yuuto's naturally sexy, but the thing between them isn't necessarily incest...(or maybe it *is*, hmm XD).

[mefiant]

If there's a possibility of homosexuality/incest/both, I will ALWAYS see it. And it will make me happy. :D Unless it's Cloud Strife, because I maintain that he is heterosexual. Yes, I do.

There was a cool Yuuto/Tomoe fic on togakushishrine a while ago. Wasn't it by hinikuish?

[ryutsuki]

Yeah, it was by her. It was really good ^^