YOU in him

Mar 06, 2009 02:06


I am undone

And you are gone

I am blurred

And you’re strong

A game

Did we play

So lame

The “stupid” Way

I went

Really,

Nothing it meant?

I saw you today. No, I thought that it was you. Those dark brown eyes, lucid and meek, I looked into them forever you know.

I wondered this is how it must be to see you stand behind the podium and enrapture your audience, ( Read more... )

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didn't read pavithran March 7 2009, 11:46:19 UTC
I didn't read this post :(

But I am still commenting .

your blog is Unreadable with 60 % of screen taken by template it is very hard to read lines as they become short and your eye's will feel the pain .
Your blog will surely fail the accessibility test :P
I still like the template color , but if possible try changing the section of posts width to something more . ( does LJ allow it ? )

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Re: didn't read pavithran March 10 2009, 21:48:47 UTC
Thanks for changing the template,and I am happy that you used something similar to mine ;)

Anyways , nice post keep more of them coming , wish I could write something like this ( will graduate from dairy writer to a pro-blogger if I could accomplish that ;) )

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For those who don't read :P pun_princess March 11 2009, 10:00:13 UTC
Well, I loved that template but yeah the width of the main body trouble me too, made the posts seem too long :P
LJ doesnt allow formatting for free users :( I wish they would let us upload themes like Blogger.

Thank You. Even reading diaries is fun, there's othing called pro and amateur blogger. there's audience for all kinds, just write on.
BTW, hows your morning walk coming along? ;)Nomore fotos? :P

Cheers,

PS: I was testing the LJ audience with this piece, I have another blog where I post all the fiction stuff :)

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again template! pavithran March 13 2009, 05:40:53 UTC
One more template change .. people will forget your blog :P ( not me ofcourse )

I am going offtopic !

These people LJ,wordpress.com won't allow bloggers to change template HTML as it will seriously affect their business !

Strangely google doesn't care .

Anyways the best thing to do is get a domain and host your wordpress on it !

I kind of like LJ with it's friends page and direct linking of friends .. LJ is like a kind of social networking site in its own style .

Ya will write , and will not read your blogger posts :P

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missinsomnia March 8 2009, 02:47:45 UTC
Loved this piece. It made me smile, grin and reminisce.

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missinsomnia March 8 2009, 02:49:14 UTC
by the way - its a pain to reply to your posts - dont take offence it's just this check thing that wants to ensure I"m not some computer / robot spamming!!! Have to type the two words so many freaking times before my post is acknowledged!!!!!

Ok well my rant is over now :)

Off I go to thru the posting process now

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missinsomnia March 10 2009, 19:56:18 UTC
I agree! captcha hatao bhai...

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pun_princess March 11 2009, 09:54:47 UTC
Wokay! Who are you btw?

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fanks peeyu anonymous March 10 2009, 19:55:10 UTC
Oye I loved the story yaar. Agreed you can do contemporary stories too and I got the message loud and clear boss.
Nothing it meant , sure!

Happy :-)

lublublublubssss
-D

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Re: fanks peeyu pun_princess March 11 2009, 09:54:21 UTC
Your comment comes last and this was written just for ya!
I ain't writing nomore stories fr ya x-(

Not Happy :(

No lublub :P

-P

PS: thanks babe!

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anonymous March 18 2009, 14:55:12 UTC
hey! guess who's back :P stupid tests and all. you know what, i actually had a curious/delightful time thru one o the "studying" sessions at the biotech block o my college, thats why i chose to reply almost immediately here :D so guess what im wearing my trademark in your face shirts and being loud and all, cos well we didnt really study there, we sit there cos its breezy, and the view is good, so as to speak :P so this girl was there, and well both o us jus kept lookin at each other and smiling like what you'd see in those stupid chick flick! sadly enough nothing really happened cos by the time i was trying to go over to her and say something clever, it was time for me to write my test.. almost missed lunch cos o that! but well i'm NOT a quitter, wish this story brings me some kinda luck or summat lol! and sorry haven'e been able to check the other blogs, been swamped up here :( but good to see you keep comin up with em, keep it up :P

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pun_princess March 18 2009, 17:05:42 UTC
Ah! gudluck wid ur pursuits of happiness ;-)
Nice whiling away time and all, dats d fun of engg. you ain't a true engg if you do not believe in last night big fight concept on the day before examz :)

well i got midsems coming up so there's gonna be a brief hiatus on my blog too :)

BTW, what copy and paste? this story is ORIGINAL copyright stuff by me??

O_o

o_O

O_o

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anonymous March 19 2009, 15:09:10 UTC
lol after you enter the capthca, there was this text that you have to copy and paste.. haha not your writing obviously! o and best o luck for your tests!!!

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pun_princess March 19 2009, 17:19:31 UTC
Thanks for the wishes :)
I did away with CAPTCHA a few days back! Is it still showing up? :(

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anonymous March 18 2009, 14:55:53 UTC
o cool, you don have to copy and paste that junk now :D

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