Honesty Is Honestly The Hardest Thing - 26/29

Feb 02, 2010 18:54

Title: Honesty Is Honestly The Hardest Thing
Pairing: Gen....almost definitely going to stay gen...I'll let you know otherwise.
Rating: R
Disclaimer: This exists in the same land as the Clangers. Only difference is I wish they were real whereas this....definitely do not wish it was real.
Warning: This chapter gets really nasty. Please, if you have ( Read more... )

kradam

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alienanalysis February 3 2010, 13:14:35 UTC
Woah, no wonder that was tough for you to write... and even though we all knew what was coming it was still tough to read. Poor, poor Adam :( Let's hope he never ever has to endure anything like that in his life!

But subject matter aside, that was so brilliantly written, you could really feel Adam's panic and fear. And the part where he retreats into his mind was really touching, we all do that in our deepest, darkest moments don't we. I'm really intreged to read the last couple of parts - I hope Adam gets the closure he needs and can move on :)

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pumpkinriver February 4 2010, 17:47:42 UTC
Thank you bb! I kept putting writing this off and off, it's why it took a few days to get posted!

It really means a lot that you thought it was well written! That was one of my biggest worries with this chapter so thank you so much for letting me know :).

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susysunflower February 3 2010, 15:08:12 UTC
Oh Pumpkin, that was sooo hard to read and I am even sure harder to write. When the knife appeared, I am screaming 'Please don't cut his pretty face'

When the wild dog pack mentioned that their girlfriends and daughters loved Adam, did you include that part to humanize Adam, were they jealous that their ladies loved Adam, or did they realize Adam was famous and there would be consequences (and there were) Or were these animals just too freakin stupid to think about the situation that deeply? Just curious

My new story surrounds Adam with a little extra love in your honor

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pumpkinriver February 4 2010, 17:56:55 UTC
Hey Susy, yeah, it was definitely hard to write. I'm so hitting the fluff after this story is done!

When the knife appeared, I am screaming 'Please don't cut his pretty face'Now would I have done that! Umm....okay...maybe past form says that I might have :D ( ... )

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embaka February 4 2010, 00:26:41 UTC
Sorry, I had to catch up, couldn't find this story tho I know I bookmarked last time. Finally remembered I had saved you comment in email so I found it that way. I still believe this an epic story of great importance. Everyone talks about random acts of love and paying it forward, and how it affects many people, which is great and as it should be. But I think it is easy to ignore how acts of hate and violence affects more than just the person there are directed at, how it trickles down unto every facet of society. You are showing this in your story.

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pumpkinriver February 4 2010, 17:57:55 UTC
Heya, glad to see that you found it again. I know how frustrating it is when you lose a story you were in the middle of reading.

I'm so glad that upon catching up you're still enjoying it, that really means a lot :D.

Thank you for the wonderful comment!

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