That Which is Wholly Unsayable (Harry/Ginny, NC-17)

[pumpkin_fics]

Title: That Which is Wholly Unsayable
Author: pumpkinpasty @ pumpkin_fics
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 5414
Summary: The line between dreams and reality is a thin, gossamer thread; when the pull is strong enough, it breaks.
Notes: Written for emmagrant01 in the 2007 smutty_claus Christmas Exchange. Originally posted here. Many mercis to akissinacrisis for her typo-catching and motivation. This fic was loosely

Comments

[excitedrainbow]

as/d.vlkjaosuc/\..as,dkl;vc OMG OMG!

*flails*

This is incredible. I actually am lost for words right now.

I really love what you did with the mix of first-person and third person - it adds an extra dimension to the sense of dreaming that is scattered throughout this, and which you've captured so well.

Gooorgeous, my darling - Cooky was brillant, as was various little things which I cannot begin to gush about enough - them hanging on to the clock, for instance, and Ron taking his anger out on a tree (♥).

♥

[siriusrocks18]

the time-traveler's wife is one of my favorite books - i was happy to see it inspire your story! :D i love this! thanks for sharing :D

[ayappe]

Wow...this was really beautiful. I love the dreaminess of it all, and how bittersweet it is. I was almost in tears at the part with Cooky. And Harry's thoughts when he's talking to Bill...so perfect.

[fitzette]

How in holy FUCK have I never read this? I had to stop in the middle of this and email my sister the bit with Cooky. And the dry and bitter like toast and coffee? Wow. This story, it's like, like all the words just existed to do your bidding.

This was just glorious.