The Man I Used To Know (Chapter Four/?)

[pulpobsessed]

Title: The Man I Used To Know

Comments

[captain_love]

Can't tell you how much i'm loving this story... Dave's return to life after "the incident" is really well told, and their parallel search for each other is intriguing... By the way the chapter ends, my guess is that Dave found him first... (then again maybe not) But the big question is : where is Chris ?

Enjoy your holidays, I'll be patiently waiting for the next chapter...

[traciamc]

You really are trying to kill me, aren't you? Leaving it there? Ugh! I really love this story, but the problem is, every time there's a new chapter, I just want another one!

Have a great vacation...I'll be sitting here, patiently waiting for the next chapter. I hear vacations are great for writing! ;)

[missa_1026]

Oh God, is right. I need your next chapter. Now.

No, go enjoy your vacation. You deserve it.

But. Seriously. Thanks for the cliffhanger.
Great chapter, tho. And where IS Chris? Hmmmm.

[beatkicks]

This chapter was my favorite so far. I like how you show them living parallel lives. Neither are unhappy, but both sort of have this nagging feeling that something is missing or off. How you described the numb feeling the anti-depressants gave him. was great too, because it can be so true. I was on them for a time and had to go off because I just felt nothing. No happiness, no sadness. I felt like I was just a shell. Also the idea of something as small as seeing a movie with someone pushing Dave forward, making this bigger impact on his life, I related to that so much. It's great.

I hope you have a nice vacay, and I'll be looking forward to more! :D

[totoro_pirate]

I love this so much... are you going to keep writing this? Please say yes :(