The Man I Used To Know (Chapter Three/?)

[pulpobsessed]

Title: The Man I Used To Know

Comments

[vintagelamb]

What an incredibly powerful chapter. I love how you are able to convey your characters' emotions with such a keen eye for what's going on both on and beneath the surface.

My only concrit is that you're not posting daily (hourly?), as I'm always left clawing for more.

[vkdemon]

Beautiful, all three chapters. Dave and his Father's relationship is just so heartbreaking and powerful!

I just read all 3 chapters and I have to say Chris is just as wonderful as from the last incarnation.

[captain_love]

I was pleasantly surprised to see you're going back in time to recall the previous events... didn't expect that ! As always love the story, and Paul is a fantastic Dad. I love how Dave manages to shyly ask for friendship, and Mercedes's answer.

The tension is growing between Kurt and Blaine and I sense some drama incoming...

Thanks for sharing !

[meghan_84]

this is really well written. Lovely work!

[bbmaniac]

:-O