porn_battle repost: "Toast" (Battlestar Galactica, Leoben/Kara)

[puella_nerdii]

This one had an extended edition, but I think the shorter version has more oomph. And more punching per paragraph, which is the important part.

Toast. BSG, Kara/Leoben. 740 words, PG-13. Warnings for punching. A lot of punching.

“Good morning, Kara,” Leoben says. “What do you want on your toast?”

Comments

[lunar47]

ouch that was a lot of punching, lol.

And a toaster. No. Two toasters

LOL, loved that line.

[demonqueen666]

GAH. This is really good in a devil-in-the-details kind of way, like how she keeps emphasising that things are real, not like on New Caprica or the battlestar, and how he's proud of her for beating him up.