Fortune and Fools, Chapter Two (FFXII AU, Balthier, Zecht)

[puella_nerdii]

Aaand here's chapter two, finally. ehe. You know, considering how long it took me to write the first chapter, the turnover time between chapters one and two is actually short! In all seriousness, though, I think chapter three's coming along next week.

Here's Chapter One, if you missed it. A brief recap: After running away, Balthier decides to

Comments

[mithrigil]

Good Lord, Archadian geniture is convoluted.

Honey, you know the banter in this is fantastic, and your Zecht is an utter rogue and that is so awesome. I can see the plot bubbling. And the tactics refs, of course, just make me go squee~

[puella_nerdii]

It is. I actually had to draw out charts to keep it all straight.

*blushblush* I think Zecht was kind of born to be a pirate king, he just had to go through a few career paths first. And I had fun with the Tactics shout-outs. (Would probably try to incorporate more VS nods, but I haven't played it yet.)

[everlet]

I don't know why this does not have more comments because this was fantastic. The dialogue, the intrigue!

[puella_nerdii]

*blush* Well, this is gen, and I think gen always gets less comments. And FFXII seems to be slowing down a little these days. But I'm really glad you're enjoying the story!

[hyperion_rising]

This is pretty darn awesome.