30 Days of Puckurt Drabble: Day 14

[patchfire]

It's day fourteen of our June 30 Days of Puckurt drabble fest!

Here be the rules; don't forget to include a rating if the piece is rated higher than PG

Comments

30 Firsts -- No (R) 1/2

[emoryems]

Warning: violence, homophobic slurs

NoKurt’s ears are ringing, a high-pitched and metallic buzz that drowns the rest of the world out. There is something wrong with his eyes; they won’t focus and every time his lids slide shut it becomes harder to open them again

Re: 30 Firsts -- No (R) 2/2

[emoryems]

Tears are dripping steadily from Kurt’s eyes, catching and pooling in his hair and ears, mixing in with the streaks of blood painting him. He can’t move his arm, not without excruciating pain taking him over and black dots encroaching on his vision

Re: 30 Firsts -- No (R) 2/2

[ricaresinrp]

Very well written.

Re: 30 Firsts -- No (R) 2/2

[patchfire]

*sniff* God, poor boys. I was on pins and needles to make sure they'd both make it.

Re: 30 Firsts -- No (R) 2/2

[bloodstrom]

Your title is very appropriate. I just wanted to scream that the whole way through this!

Re: 30 Firsts -- No (R) 2/2

[ithicajackal]

I knew what prompt you were using almost immediately and I still gritted my teeth the entire way through. This was intense and your descriptions are so amazing it made some parts painful to read, but so, so very effective. Beautifully upsetting, if that's possible. Now they need some serious TLC. <3

Re: 30 Firsts -- No (R) 2/2

[emoryems]

Damnit. I was so close to making it through this without crying (lies). Yeah, there are some tears over here.

This was beautifully written and just so gorgeous; I loved the style, how we learned things only as Kurt figured them out.

<3 <3 <3

Re: 30 Firsts -- No (R) 2/2

[lezi]

Loved this, from the wince-worthy details to Kurt being selfishly relieved he didn't suffer alone.
Awesome job!