30 Days of Puckurt Drabble: Day 3

[raving_liberal]

Welcome to the third day of 30 Days of Puckurt Drabble in June!

You can see the rules post here.

Drabbles go in the comments section of THIS post. Looking forward to another good day -- y'all have impressed us so far!

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30 Firsts -- Laid Bare (R)

[emoryems]

Laid BareKurt’s fingers shake as he reaches up to tug at the bowtie around his neck, anxiety shuddering through him and leaving him flushed and flustered. He can almost literally feel Puck’s eyes following his movements, tracing the lines of his fingers and wrists as he works to remove his clothes one article at a time

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[emoryems]

Any nervousness he may have felt is soon extinguished, though, as Puck takes to running his hands everywhere he can. Up over his shoulders and down his sides, over the slight swell of his hips, fingers teasing the skin of Kurt’s buttocks, across the long lengths of his thighs and calves. The other boy leaves no skin untouched, but the way he is almost enthralled by what he sees, the way his hands move as though awed, tells Kurt all he needs to know.

When Puck is done his exploration, face a rictus of bliss, Kurt leans forward and mouths along his neck, sucking at his pulse-point and nibbling at the underside of his jaw, until he reaches Puck’s mouth. They kiss lightly, not fevered or desperate, but with passion and the knowledge that they are each what the other desires.

~A/N: Ack -- I wrote this really quick at the last minute. I hope it's okay :/ ... and I really need at least one Puckurt icon for this, geeze. I should get on that

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[eyesarmslove]

THIS. THIS. Gorgeous imagery and so much love beneath the surface.

Puck has seen many people before; tasted their flesh and experienced their bodies

I LOVE this. Exquisite.

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[emoryems]

Awe thank you ♥

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[emoryems]

It is more than okay! It is lovely!
Very descriptive and it gives a great feel for all of Kurt's reactions.

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[emoryems]

That's awesome to hear :) thank you!

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[patchfire]

Ngggh. THat was wonderful.

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[emoryems]

Thanks <3

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[emoryems]

I'm glad you enjoyed ;) Thank you!

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[ontinia]

That was brilliant. You are brilliant.

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[emoryems]

Awe -- this made me squee in happiness. Thanks, hon! ♥

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[ricaresinrp]

Very good. I love Puck's intensity.

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[emoryems]

:D I'm glad that worked for you! Thank you <3

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[ithicajackal]

So lovely. I really enjoyed Kurt's POV, going through his insecurity and then getting the all the assurance he needs from Puck. Your descriptions make your pieces so immersive. And I just love tender, adoring Puck here :)

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[emoryems]

:D I was a bit wary of using Kurt's POV, especially because the prompt was more focused on Puck; I tried to show it through Kurt. Unfortunately my brain wasn't going to go any other way :P

Thank you!! ♥