Excel

May 04, 2007 20:27

Title: Excel

Author: puckkit

Rating: G

Pairing/Character: Sylar (or Gabriel, I suppose)

Disclaimer: I do not own this character or the show Heroes, therefore all of this is false and made up from my charmingly eccentric imagination.

Author's Notes: Just a little character sketch of a younger Gabriel. He's such a fascinating character, it's hard to ( Read more... )

sylar, heroes

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vintageglamourx May 5 2007, 03:51:40 UTC
Wow. This? Is Amazing, with a capital A. Intriguing and beautiful, all at once, the way it depicts his emotions and what sets him apart from the rest. Love it!

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puckkit May 5 2007, 09:20:37 UTC
Thank you very much!

Those were all the things I was going for ^^

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jadore_la_vie June 15 2007, 03:49:42 UTC
Damn! Fanfic is fantastic. I love looking at different people's writing styles. This was awesome!! You're very talented, and welcome to the community!

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puckkit June 15 2007, 09:45:20 UTC
Fanfiction makes me so happy! It's almost sad that immediately after seeing a show or movie I think of the fanficy possibilities.

Thank you! I'm very excited to catch up, Sylar pwns me ^^

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sarahetc June 15 2007, 12:18:01 UTC
Wow this is awesome! It's so internal. You've done a really fantastic job at creating momentum, and at punctuating that momentum, esp. with his mom calling him "Gabe." How grand is it?

Is there more where this came from?

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puckkit June 15 2007, 23:22:04 UTC
Thanks! I really like getting inside heads and little ficlets are the perfect place for that.

I'm afraid there's not, though if I think of a good idea I may fly with it. Gabriel/Sylar is way too awesome a character.

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anonymous June 16 2007, 02:15:12 UTC
Wow. That was great. It's so well written and you captured Gabriel's state of mind perfectly.

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puckkit June 16 2007, 17:45:19 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad you think so :)

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