Still Life Fortunes

Apr 12, 2007 16:58

Title: Still Life Fortunes

Author: puckkit

Rating: G

Pairing: Mohinder/Sylar

Disclaimer: I do not own any of these characters or the show Heroes, therefore all of this is false and made up from my charmingly eccentric imagination.

Author's Notes:I haven't been reading a whole lot of mylar lately (or anything) because of class and work (and I've been ( Read more... )

sylar, heroes, mohinder

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runzu April 12 2007, 21:22:29 UTC
Nice, though a little more clarity would be better (the story, not anything else lol), or I could be just not getting it. LOL Though Mohinder turning to the dark is a little depressing. :(

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puckkit April 12 2007, 21:32:05 UTC
Yeah, I am about as vague as they come. I will put a definite effort towards making more sense next time though ^^

This is actually one of my less-depressing stories! :)

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runzu April 12 2007, 21:34:51 UTC
LOL I dunno could just be me. :P

You angst whore, you. ;)

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puckkit April 12 2007, 21:38:10 UTC
I doubt it, sometimes I forget people can't read my thoughts ;)

You know it baby! Bring on the angst!

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runzu April 12 2007, 21:26:31 UTC
Oh, I really liked the descriptions and stuff and would like to see more from you. LOL I'm sorry I failed to make that obvious in my last comment. :P

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butterflyweb April 12 2007, 22:10:42 UTC
Very lovely. I adore the repetition of "still" as I'm a total repetitions-whore, as anyone reading my stuff can attest to. The whole No, but then Maybe, but then Yes, was just great, and I loved the fortunes.:)

Thanks for sharing!

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puckkit April 12 2007, 23:44:04 UTC
Cheers for repetition-whores! I adore them. In songs or poems, but especially in stories. And I'm glad you picked up the No-Maybe-Yes!

Thank you for reading/commenting!

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eonism April 12 2007, 22:19:55 UTC
Oh my, that is just fabulous. I really enjoyed the way you showed Mohinder's turn towards darkness. I've seen a lot of other writers play around with that idea, and unfortunately he usually comes off sounding out of character, but the way you did it was very believeable. Painful, but believeable, and understandable under the circumstances.

Lovely work all around, :)

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puckkit April 12 2007, 23:52:00 UTC
Thank you! ^^

Mohinder just fascinates me- I think it's fascinating to imagine him in a relationship with Sylar just because of all the moral issues. He's such a man of ethics and ideas, but yet not. I mean, the pulling of the gun? He, technically, shot a man. Was willing to kill someone. I just love all the different facets.

/rant on awesomeness of Mohinder. Haha

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without_mission April 12 2007, 23:46:29 UTC
aww, even though he went to de dark side I can't help but hug him until he stops breathing X3 Short DEEP, choo rock my dahling! (glomp) XD loved those fortunes too!

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puckkit April 12 2007, 23:54:16 UTC
Hee! He deserves a big hug ^^

Thanks, hun! *cuddles tightly*

I can't claim ownership for either, I'm afraid. They're both real fortunes, though mapanda found the second (most important) one because I am incompetent. :)

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